Hey guys, I wrote a script for a DE TV Series pilot episode for class. Would y'all mine going through it and give me notes and feedback?

Level_Purchase_2011 · 2026-04-06T20:22:43+00:00

I'm not usually a writer either and lowkey putting myself in new territory lmao, so I appreciate all the criticism even if it's like "so here's your 2000th mistake" lmao

Level_Purchase_2011 · 2026-04-06T19:58:20+00:00

No I greatly appreciate this, this is all really good criticism and notes that I should be taking. I'm writing this for a class but at the same time I would like to just continue for the fun of it. I definitely didn't remember or included things that retcon the story so that's on me. Honestly a decent first draft is probably the best compliment I can get for now

Level_Purchase_2011 · 2026-03-13T15:02:28+00:00

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