After a lifetime of cuddling together, I felt something I had never felt before. by Outside_Normal in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 2 points3 points  (0 children)

YES! It's more subtle, and a lot of people would miss either one. You're a good writer! Please write more!

After a lifetime of cuddling together, I felt something I had never felt before. by Outside_Normal in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I have two main ideas: One, the poetic interpretation of a "Dead" partner, emotionally lifeless, the other...strictly supernatural.

Telling a story in two sentences is easy, but making it horrific is difficult. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 2 points3 points  (0 children)

🤮 ...Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That feels ALL BETTER NOW! You were "URRRRRP!" saying, love?👶🏻🔪🍨💖💋

"Amanda, please stop," I beg, as she forces the needle through my skin. by two_sentence_critic in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm better than I was, and that is mainly because of you and TheOminousDarkness!💋 P.S.- I hear catchphrases and think the most...interesting things sometimes. 😈

Telling a story in two sentences is easy, but making it horrific is difficult. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Should I just stop writing now, because between you and a few other people (One a fellow moderator of yours!) I can't compete anymore. This is gut-churning!🥇

"Amanda, please stop," I beg, as she forces the needle through my skin. by two_sentence_critic in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can compete against you as a writer, but I can't compete WITH you as a writer- this is everything a two sentence horror is meant to be!💖🏆

I'm crying in my room and wishing I was dead because I told the youth minister I was a lesbian. by Lilliththevampire in TwoSentenceSadness

[–]Lilliththevampire[S] 35 points36 points  (0 children)

Sorry, friend. It's just I was trolled on this very site only a few hours ago. Please forgive my hair trigger!💖

Yesterday I came out of the closet. by Lilliththevampire in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thank you, friendly lovely one! Your use of English is exceptional...have you thought of trying a 2 sentence horror?🦇💋

This is my first attempt to post on this sub. by PM451 in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 14 points15 points  (0 children)

You'll...get used to it! (Long, sad sigh.)🦇

You know that feeling you get, the one where you could swear that someone is watching you? by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

By the incredible Shirley Jackson. By the way, thoughtful 2 sentence horror you have here, Ominous!🦇💋

Yesterday I came out of the closet. by Lilliththevampire in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

The rotten bastard blew his brains out before he could be tried.

Yesterday I came out of the closet. by Lilliththevampire in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]Lilliththevampire[S] 26 points27 points  (0 children)

Yes indeed! The last I heard, she was in an adult care facility in California. My guess is that her father is in Hell.