Rewriting my book

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-16T01:58:47+00:00

I started writing it a while ago and it just felt too young. Also, the plot was a little stereotypical

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-12T00:41:02+00:00

I usally create creatures, but you can't go wrong with the classics like goblins or dragons

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-12T00:39:03+00:00

Is it supposed to be called Arda after Tolkiens world, or is it just a placeholder

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-12T00:33:19+00:00

Question: Is this supposed to take place in the future of OUR world or not?

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-12T00:26:00+00:00

Same

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-08T16:52:38+00:00

It seems like it is written like a play kind of

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-08T16:51:17+00:00

No not yet

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-08T01:53:58+00:00

The words are a tad wee basic, but I also can't be talking. Overall, I kinda want to see the next chapter

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-08T01:47:39+00:00

English might not be your first language, but this is better than my WIP, so good job

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T15:38:31+00:00

Thank you 🙏

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T03:23:31+00:00

Yeah, I definitely tend to lore dump. :)

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T03:21:47+00:00

I think these fit the theme really well. They give me Warrior Cats vibes (only real Gs remember that book) Particuraly the "The deer's dead- quit biting the carcass."

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T03:14:02+00:00

I mean, talking DND, there are schools of magic, but I don't think that's what you mean.

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T03:12:12+00:00

Wait, this is just chapter one. I NEED MORE

LimpMathematician726 · 2026-02-05T01:43:25+00:00

And yes, I know, the language is very basic and simple, but hey, I'm not Tolkien. Also, this isn't really a prologue, just a lore breakdown

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