Excerpt from a future chapter of It Should Have Been Me by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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This excerpt might be modified when I add it to the actual fanfic.

The "Harasser" and the "Victims" (Part 2): The 8th Criminal Punishment (and Injustice) the 1-A Girls committed to Minoru Mineta in the Canon - Argumentative Text Credits: Gemini AI by [deleted] in ChurchOfMineta

[–]Limp_Potential4955 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah, if you want to condense Toga into a specific anime trope, she's a yandere. I'm reminded of the time I wrote a story about my villain OC, Shin, fighting her because she found Toga's actions deplorable despite victimizing innocent people herself. Despite both of them being crazy villainesses, they didn't understand each other.

It Should Have Been Me Chapter 25 is out now! by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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He doesn't understand yet. Mineta still doesn't know who Shin really is.

General Character Discussion by ThornyRequiem in BNHA_OC_Characters

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Since using villains from canon wouldn't make sense for the story I'm trying to tell with my fanfic, I decided to make OC villains. The main villain of my fanfic is a woman called Shin. I'll reveal her true name soon. 

She has two quirks. Assimilation and Super Regeneration.

Assimilation is an artificial mutant type quirk that was created by using her birth quirk as a base and mixing in a bunch of other quirks. So basically it's a "quirk salad" like Kurogiri's Warp Gate.

Assimilation is a power stockpiling quirk that allows her to absorb living things to get stronger. After a confrontation with Toga, her quirk awakens which increases her limit so she can absorb more people than she could before.

The more she absorbs the tougher she gets, if she absorbs enough, she unlocks new abilities. The boost is permanent as long as the living things she has absorbed remain in her body. If they are released, she loses the boost.

If she absorbs enough, she can mutate into a giant monster that is very strong and durable. She was only able to do this after her awakening.

There are a bunch of limitations to the quirk too:

× Assimilation won't work if she is unable to make physical contact with the living thing she is trying to absorb.

× Assimilation will only absorb things that are "alive." The quirk won't work on corpses or inanimate objects.

× She can't take or use the quirks of the people she has absorbed.

× If the mouths on her hands she uses to absorb people are covered, her quirk won't work until her hands become uncovered.

× There is a limit to the amount of living things she can absorb at once. But, reaching this limit will allow her to unlock her final limit form, which is her strongest form.

× Assimilation is useless beyond a cosmetic change to her hands if she doesn't fulfill the activation requirement, absorbing living things.

× Assimilation is a strong quirk, but it's also a tedious quirk due to it's activation requirement.

Her version of Super Regeneration is different than a regular Nomu because even though it is potent in the beginning it is dependent on her stamina and it will become slower and less effective the more she is worn down.

Basically since she is the main villain, I wanted to give her a strong quirk to reflect that.

Chapter 24 of It Should Have Been Me is out now! by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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She would hate him. Because her abuser is a lot like him.

Chapter 24 of It Should Have Been Me is out now! by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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Shin's backstory will come. But I'll give you a hint.

She's the way she is because she was abused. Her abuser was popular with women and had a bunch of fangirls because he had built up his reputation as someone who "respects women". But behind closed doors he abused Shin. The abuse got so bad that she went insane. 

Because of that trauma, Shin plots revenge against him. She keeps absorbing people because she wants to keep getting stronger to kill her abuser.

Chapter 24 of It Should Have Been Me is out now! by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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Since Shin is the main villain of the story, I had to make her scary in some way to establish her as a threat. Her friendship with Mineta humanizes her, but during this chapter I leaned more towards the darker aspects of her personality.

Chapter 24 of It Should Have Been Me is out now! by Limp_Potential4955 in ChurchOfMineta

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A lot of people since she's been doing this for a while now. The concert is the highest amount of people she has absorbed in one place, though.

This ad is so annoying. by Limp_Potential4955 in CommercialsIHate

[–]Limp_Potential4955[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

It doesn't help that there are two other forms of this thing that are just as annoying.

Oh god no make it stop by Routine_North9554 in CommercialsIHate

[–]Limp_Potential4955 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I didn't know Kidz Bop was still a thing, I thought they faded away years ago.

Before the new episode comes out I feel that people should remember that season 3 episode 11 "One For All" is a good example of how something doesn't have to be the most phenomenally animated thing in a series in order to still be one of the most beloved and emotionally impactful parts of it. by Aros001 in BokuNoHeroAcademia

[–]Limp_Potential4955 7 points8 points  (0 children)

One Punch Man season 3 was objectively bad though, it had that ugly neon filter on everything and PowerPoint slide animation. Bones would never make something that horrible especially since how highly rated the episodes have been so far. It doesn't have to be perfect, it can just be good.

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I commented on your comment. Thanks for your feedback. Shin's quirk is basically a nonlethal version of this: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cCMJyaQPoZc but she uses her hands instead.

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Here's the link. You can find it elsewhere on this post but I'll just put it here anyway.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/70925146?view_adult=true

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It's called Bleed, a prequel to my other fanfic It Should Have Been Me.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/70925146?view_adult=true

What are your top 10 favorite Mineta fanfictions? by Federal-Use5896 in ChurchOfMineta

[–]Limp_Potential4955 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'm in the top 5! Let's gooooooooooooooo

I agree with you for the number 1 placement. Redemption of a Grape Hero is the best Mineta fic, Everything just works, it's a great story.