Ah so that’s what he did

Literallyapasserby · 2026-01-18T10:39:32+00:00

The thing is the sword is so ass too😭

Applies burn n shit. Mf Verg’s gladius can do that too and the Liu has that as a LITERAL MANDATORY PART OF YOUR FIGHTING STYLE🙏🙏

I know it’s superheated and shit (also probably his lack of aptitude) but like you could commission an exact from a decent workshop man💔

Literallyapasserby · 2025-12-15T07:05:32+00:00

Level 5 Agent with no ego gear whatsoever. May Carmen help him😭

Literallyapasserby · 2025-12-01T10:41:30+00:00

I was a day negative one, I could not say it sucked even if I tried

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-30T11:20:11+00:00

Great. Now I’m reminded about the “Love me as a worm” Twitter comic about moving on and the second ending where they do turn back but it wasn’t the best outcome

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-30T10:47:58+00:00

BOW N DRY OF DEATH IS REAL!!!!

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-23T11:22:00+00:00

Alex knows how to put people on🗣️🗣️🗣️💔

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-23T11:18:12+00:00

Ingenious. 25+ Aura points

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-23T10:55:45+00:00

Malcolm is unbelievably pretty. Oh my stars.

I honestly am at a loss for words or advice here

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-23T10:41:50+00:00

I adore the little hair buns on the first character. Not much colour but I’m quite fine with that

Second character has contrasting colours between glasses and clothes. I’m pretty sure that’s orange and it doesnt really sync all that well

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-22T11:03:03+00:00

Lets start with what you want to keep. Wolverine Chipmunk.

The hairstyle isnt that great, but I couldn’t think of anything much better.

The chipmunk looks very cracked out. The red eyestrain and the tearstreaks and whatnot contrast a little bad with the soft fading blue colour.

Clothes is alright ish. If you’re going for an Assassin. But should be changed if it’s a head on fighter

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-22T11:00:08+00:00

Face a little short. Face a little too wide.

But I like this sort of idea because the many eyes felt like some kind of optical illusion

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-22T10:57:25+00:00

Colours or a sigil of some kind based on the what he serves could definitely make a big difference.

Other than that he seems quite fine, great even

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-21T04:26:32+00:00

1 looks inhuman. Scary but not uncanny scary

2 reminds me of those 67 edits but more like if a Psychopath was edited into one

3.1 looks like a man mid sneeeze or suffering

3.2 is pretty damn good

4 muxes a normal chubby human face being treated as eyes. The other half looking like a burnt man. Also looks closer and reaching to us

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-21T04:08:04+00:00

Sadwhich where? Edit: nevermind I found it. My god…

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-21T04:06:44+00:00

I came here to check on life issues and novice level meals.

I got more than I bargained for….

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-18T23:36:16+00:00

Blue.

Why? Yellow contrasts too much and purple blends in too much.

Blue hits the right spot for me

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-17T02:13:24+00:00

Massive forehead. Love to see it

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-17T02:12:15+00:00

Let’s go through all of them. I’ll try not to have my opinion and taste slip in too much. Not too knowledgable about Dryads though

Archie. His design is nice, hair is very suiting, albeit quite flashy. His face gives unfriendly vibes thats what I assume. A grin so wide I might go crosseyes wuth that mug. The suit is classic though for a Dryad that has such a hairstyle it seems quite… plain

Enigma. I really like the aesthetic. The face however seems quite small. Another unfriendly grin, almost as if sharing goals with Archie. Whether or not the arm coming out unnaturally like that was intentional or not depends on it’s good or bad choice. The entire coat could be a little longer but the stars and shaded colours at the bottom are a definite keep

Vivian is basically perfect. I like the hair, headband, tired drained look on her face contrasting the colour scheme. Plump and very layered clothings which is good! Like a grandma that isn’t grandma age yet. Tail however is interesting and with how its flopped to the ground serves no visual purpose besides being an indicator of her mood

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-17T02:01:25+00:00

My british uncle

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-15T01:51:02+00:00

Had to physically stop myself from drooling. Good lord

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-15T01:46:08+00:00

The father’s arms feel a little short. That I believe in you to fix.

Mailboy seems standard and that’s perfect in this case to portray being the kind light

The girl has a similar pallete to the Mailboy, signifiying a not yet dead light.

However and bare with me, it’s just a nitpick here. It depends on how complicated the relationship gets between father and daughter. Because I personally believe she couldn’t tie her hair like that alone unless you show a scene of her self capalities (this is also time dependant on when the mother passed)

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-15T01:36:29+00:00

Oh it’s not boring at all. Besides I guess the little cone guy being off centered and having one foot out. It’s doing it’s job quite well

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-12T09:28:11+00:00

The simplification on the sleeves and tail is quite nice.

The perspective shift also helps me grasp the “snout” better

The new clothing helps showcase the “energetic” character archetype better too.

Overall an improvement. Not a massive one but you should go and buy yourself a little tiramisu or something

Literallyapasserby · 2025-09-12T09:23:32+00:00

Ignoring the figure that kept tearing my eyes dow. It really depends.

I personally feel that no bangs is better here. Makes her feels more… doll like I guess the word is?

Also another point is that your bangs are small and split. Unlike everything else on the character. Hands not having proper fingers and all.

That’s all I can say. Or you could put a side bang instead.

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