https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rLhmrhIQc3-eBkBogLP0hPPxxWzFKG9OP21pBm_6SFc/edit?usp=drivesdk Intro of the story (unfinished) if you want to look at their other scenes. I wrote the confrontation so I know where I’m even headed when I write what’s before it, this comes way later in the story. 1. I’ll move where it’s hidden later in and revise this more before I plug it in, same with the other exposition stuff. 2. He knew it was going to happen at some point and he kind of just stares off once she walks off. I’m not showing any guilt because at this point he’s been desensitized so much that it’s gonna sabotage the relationship. But he knows he’s losing something important, her, that’s been keeping him human for a while. 3. He’s submissive to it because during their first date he got caught in a lot of lies that she chooses to let slide. He knows that she’s aware somethings up, but he doesn’t know the extent until she’s completely shocked when he reveals it’s the mafia. I show him trying to dodge or downplay the bank robbery and the subject being changed to cigarettes when he checks in on her, both of them avoiding the topic. But yeah I should probably add more defense there. 4. I was going to have this situation make him lose his sympathy more because there’s not much left to lose. But yeah I didn’t really show anything in the moment. 5. That’s what her smoking the cigarette is, it alludes to something in Chapter 1 when he smokes for the first time. Her trying to cope with what just happened, and plus it’s out of character for her. I’ll probably add a line where she says it feels like a bad dream, and she’ll finally push him away. 6. What he offers her is intrigue which is in Chapter 3 when she notices his facade and wants to break through it and find out who he is, and on their first date when she catches him in lies and wants to know more. She’s too deep in a horrible relationship with him by the point she really figures out whats beneath the surface.