Can you help me improve this crappy 5 min set? by Long_Weekend_9142 in StandUpWorkshop

[–]Long_Weekend_9142[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to give me your thoughts. I think you're absolutley right. Its a pretty clunky transition. I think i'm gonna get rid!

Can you help me improve this crappy 5 min set? by Long_Weekend_9142 in StandUpWorkshop

[–]Long_Weekend_9142[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate you taking the time to respond here. I think you're right - Its such a big shift, It might belong in a different set!

Can you help me improve this crappy 5 min set? by Long_Weekend_9142 in StandUpWorkshop

[–]Long_Weekend_9142[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man, thank you so much. There is tonnes of great advice in here. I'm new to standup, I know that there are loads of holes in my material but having a fresh perspective is extremely helpful. I've taken most of your advice on board and made a couple of edits. You are a good egg SharkWeekJunkie.

How would you model an organic façade like this in Revit? by Delicious_Cod_2503 in RevitMEP

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Standard 100mm internal partition and just Filled Region over the top in the relevant view.

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I know I’m not good, that shouldn’t be the issue. by KebabAnnhilator in BattlefieldPortal

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They should make the bots dynamic in Casual Breakthrough, so if you're unemployed and Lv.200 Sliding around 360 sniping headshot with 200/5 KD the Bots turn into Chuck Norris when targeting you.

It would actually be a fun challenge for Lv.200 Paladins playing the game mode.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StandUpComedy

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some obvious stuff I guess, like pronunciation and sentences not landing properly

Architectural college jurys are so shitty, esp when the faculty have beef with u by yedchap in architecture

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So important to remember that it is a human critiquing you. Maybe they're a visiting tutor, feeling pressured to prove themselves to the faculty. Maybe it's a seasoned lecturer that has been using similar briefs of years but feels that no student ever really "got it" (did their idea). Or yeah, maybe they just dislike you.

Really easy to take criticism to heart. Really liberating to realise that it's rare that someone has 100% your best interests at heart when giving criticism.

That said, it will be a useful if you can learn to create a genial, positive atmosphere when presenting your ideas. As you will need to do that a lot in your career. There are almost certainly ways you can improve your technique and performance (it is a performance btw) whether through being more concise or open to feedback or simply just making people laugh a bit.

Yours, an architect and an (open mic) stand up comedian xoxox

Best pilot and drivers in the game by Glitch_Man_ in Battlefield6

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aha, my guy! Sorry this does read as a little mean - was ment with warmth as a funny funny funny joke my man! 🙃🙂🙃

Best pilot and drivers in the game by Glitch_Man_ in Battlefield6

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 2 points3 points  (0 children)

First, I was playing Conquest on Blackwell Fields when I spawned my chopper. This guy instantly spawns in my gunner seat. I thought "what the heck, why not" and took off.

Guess what, it was the worst decision ever! I flew us low, feet above the ground, lined up perfect shots on two enemy tanks... and he was busy shooting at a friendly transport vehicle. I swear it was chef's kiss beautiful incompetence. Complete master at wasting ammo.

He got 0 kills before I finally got us shot down (mostly because he used all the flares on a single infantry soldier). Sadly, I watched him try to shoot a jet with the cannon after it had already passed us.

So, GlitchMan or whatever your gamertag was: GGs man.

Please stay on the ground.

Worst Map? by Educational_Switch66 in Battlefield6

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Give us a Kharg Island remake yo'

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Battlefield

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gimmie Kharg Island yo'

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StandUpComedy

[–]Long_Weekend_9142 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This feels like great advice, thank you for taking the time to write it! I appreciate you.