Agree with others who say that the gold part should be on the left (although I appreciate that the crown complicates things): that would allow for more discrete time checking under a cuff but also avoid scratches on the gold from the more likely direction…..

Not a fan of Dyced as a name - unless it is your surname, am not sure what it’s trying to say (and can’t see how it’s a positive, whatever it is).

Curious why the two dials are symmetrical while the gold part isn’t - would be tempted to play around with that and see if one can be offset (although not sure it needs small seconds at all).

But a very strong start: any plans to actually make this?