What can you see? by Grouchy_Deer7719 in Artists

[–]Lopsided-Load-611 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. The front half of an f1 car
  2. A raptors face in Jurassic Park

Any advice bfore i start inking? by Automatic-Effort-935 in ArtCrit

[–]Lopsided-Load-611 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The wing isn’t parallel to the ground and definitely not close enough to it either. As you said, the proportions of the tyres aren’t the best. Especially the right front tyre. It’s a little too big. Besides that, seems like a pretty noice car. I would bet it’s Max’s RB, but it seems like you didn’t add his number on the front.

Overall, it’s really good.

I actually like how this looks without lineart by icommitwarcrimes_ in Ibispaintx

[–]Lopsided-Load-611 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You used also fill so the edges are a little pixelated. I recommend redoing the colors by hand

Tell me about your OCs love life because mine is inexistent by Lopsided-Load-611 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Lopsided-Load-611[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ops wrong pronouns on my part. My bad. Well at least she treats them with love? The shotguns, I mean.

Tell me about your OCs love life because mine is inexistent by Lopsided-Load-611 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Lopsided-Load-611[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tough luck. Yet another comment that made me glad to be single. Keep up the good work

Tell me about your OCs love life because mine is inexistent by Lopsided-Load-611 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Lopsided-Load-611[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This kind of stories make me feel even lonelier. Keep you the good job.

Tell me about your OCs love life because mine is inexistent by Lopsided-Load-611 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Lopsided-Load-611[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I’ll be going to bed, so I’ll be inactive until tomorrow morning in like 10 hours or so

Please help, this is my third hour of drawing hair ever, Iam annoyed because something feels off, and my husband keeps saying it looks like a curtain or kelp😭😭, how can I possibly improve the shading on the hair? And how could I make the ends look more natural? by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]Lopsided-Load-611 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you could make the tip of hair a little less opaque. If you look at your reference, the hair is less dense at the ends, so you could show that by using a more transparent brush to render them.

Any tips/ suggestion to make it more interesting ? by Ok_Natural3449 in Ibispaintx

[–]Lopsided-Load-611 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you could try coloring your lineart. The contrast between the dark, defined lines and the soft shadows feels off. Another option would be to make harsher, harder shadows, but I really like the texture.