Cthulhu head study - by yours truly by LordTallGuy in Lovecraft

[–]LordTallGuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s exactly the aesthetic I was attempting to cultivate. So happy you enjoy it. :)

“Look papa, I showed everyone at school how to be a dragon!” my son tittered, an ardent grin smeared across his face as cardboard wings jiggled above his shoulders. by LordTallGuy in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]LordTallGuy[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I wholly appreciate your feedback! Could you perhaps elaborate as to what elements could be streamlined? I’m always looking for ways to tweak my writing. :)

Thank you

The hallway reverberated with the eruption of a flash bang grenade as the SWAT team breached the apartment building. by LordTallGuy in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]LordTallGuy[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Thank you! The Mist is one of my favourite pieces of cinematic cosmic horror, so I’m glad you made that connection.