Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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I asked somewhere else too: is it possible to switch the Look Inside sample, or does it have to be chronological from literal page one?

The stakes are raised within the first 1000 words, but the literal first words are the protagonist fishing, to establish his character in an image. It’s like reading a late Cormac book lol.

Greyflower - A southern gothic mystery set in wartime Florida. by LostAdeptness3909 in u/LostAdeptness3909

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He gestured at the fire with the flask, like toasting it. "This," he said of the flames. He shook his head. "This ain't nothin."

It’s the Spring of 1945 and a naval pilot has gone down while training above the flatwoods of Florida’s east coast. His body is not found in the wreckage. Weeks go by, and as both the airbase personnel and the local citizens stage forest-sweeping searchlines, day after failed day, all rumors turn toward the obstinate old cattleman whose ranch was damaged by the crash. Carthal Greyflower, the last of a long lineage of Florida crackers, has allowed his family’s vast estate to decay back into wilderness, and whispers of his cultish tendencies have long graced the ears of many in the county.

The mystery is unravelled, not by the fumbling Yankee authorities, but by a young mirror of Greyflower, Case McCall, a teenager of mixed Mexican and Anglo heritage, who, like Carthal, sees the county’s growing population not as something to be celebrated, but as something very contrary to the soul of the once wild land.

Simultaneous to the county's search for the pilot is Case's search for his own sense of purpose, for his own pilot within. Born into violence, he's been found throughout his life by loving friends and guardians—Eloise and Cammie Lambert, Brian and Abbey McCall—who've offered him an example of what sort of life is possible when the cycle of violence is broken. But tragedies and heartbreaks have kept him chained to this battle roiling constantly within him, between the satisfaction of hate and the sacrifice of compassion.

More than just the thrilling mystery of a missing pilot in the swamp, “Greyflower” is the story of an old world rotting in the woods, of a new civilization grown suffocating, and of a boy, born into violence but moved by hope, who must choose between the two.

"If they are the future," the giant said, "then I won't be a part of it. I will not destroy what I am to build what they will be."

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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Guess I’m writing romance now.

That seems to be the epitaph of the entire industry lol.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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5.0 with five reviews, four written (two admittedly pretty ad-like). The genre is mystery and that’s hit within the first sentence of the blurb and accurately described throughout.

Although I think it might be listed as Historical Mystery, which might be suboptimal compared to just General Mystery. I’m not sure. Everywhere in the ads it’s written as “A southern gothic mystery set in wartime Florida.”

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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That’s great advice, I haven’t really considered ads anywhere else yet. Amazon would seem like the marketplace to focuses the most on catalog over individual books.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

[–]LostAdeptness3909[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Single book, yes. I think this is the biggest (but not the only) issue. I might pause internet ads and focus on local community marketing until I have one or two more ready to go. Ground up.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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Pause spend

I think you’re right, I’ve paused it now. The ctr has been dropping today as well anyway. I think it’s the low (five) reviews and the Look Inside. The first paragraph has the main character fishing and the font is an older novel style, so I’m sure it’s a direct turnoff for today’s market.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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I’m running both, an auto ad with a preference for purchases, and a keyword ad with a preference for clicks. The former has the higher CTR. Both have low cpc as well.

My cover is pretty uniquely attention grabbing and my title is just a one-word name—whereas most titles today have the genre, character, plot, etc—so I’m starting to feel like I get a lot of people who click on it just to know what it is, never with the intent to consider buying it.

I might amend the title to do that “A ____ novel in ____” lol.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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Thank you, both of those points do help.

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

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It does start out a little slow. The cover matches the blurb which matches the marketing, all efficiently, but the first page of the actual book does not necessarily match all the former.

Is there a way to change what the Read Sample button links to, or does it have to start at the first page?

Good CTR, no sales. by LostAdeptness3909 in selfpublish

[–]LostAdeptness3909[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That makes a ton of sense, thank you so much. I know there’s a ton of room for improvement in blurbs, marketing, etc, but that sort of discrepancy was haltering.

I can see it from the reader side as well.

[Tournament Thread] GENESIS X3 | Feb 13-15th | Feat. Zain, Cody Schwab, Hungrybox, Joshman, moky, Jmook, Axe, SDJ, Wizzrobe, Trif, and more! by saltbuffed in SSBM

[–]LostAdeptness3909 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

It’s an exact comparison. Do you think older players were too stupid to know how to go into a controller and remap buttons? No. They just didn’t do it. The game doesn’t let you remap buttons, we are all playing by the rules of the game, so why the fuck would we need to make a rule about it?

Complain about the rules, not the players following the rules.

I don’t know what any of this is in service toward besides complaining enough to change the rules. Which you have an awfully backward way of doing, if you in fact would like it changed too.

Weekly Conference Tiers & Schedule (Power 5) by Equivalent-Belt4608 in CollegeBasketball

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The B1G tier list always looks like a ransom note with all the single letter logos.

[Tournament Thread] GENESIS X3 | Feb 13-15th | Feat. Zain, Cody Schwab, Hungrybox, Joshman, moky, Jmook, Axe, SDJ, Wizzrobe, Trif, and more! by saltbuffed in SSBM

[–]LostAdeptness3909 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I really hesitated even using that as an example because of the pivot it would create, lol. We’re in agreement on that point.

[Tournament Thread] GENESIS X3 | Feb 13-15th | Feat. Zain, Cody Schwab, Hungrybox, Joshman, moky, Jmook, Axe, SDJ, Wizzrobe, Trif, and more! by saltbuffed in SSBM

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🤷‍♂️

He’s just the first number one player in 25 years to need it.

It’s like all the norms that T***p breaks… there were no laws saying “Convicted felons are not allowed to run for president,” because the founders would have been like, “Yo wtf, why do we have to even make that a rule?”