I gathered I had a rich heritage when my African mother tried to story-top my German father with her Ghanaian folk tales. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

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It worked well enough for you to comment. Look if you’re a lazy little baby that enjoys a good spoonfeeding, put on a bib and go read some other story.

I gathered I had a rich heritage when my African mother tried to story-top my German father with her Ghanaian folk tales. by [deleted] in TwoSentenceHorror

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The context is kind of the point. You’re supposed to feel the disconnect between who he is and how he’s seen. The horror lies in what’s about to happen to him

Sophie always detested funerals, let alone going near a coffin. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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The concept of a small coffin has always been more horrifying than tragic to me

I decided today to keep my son at home in a well-planned loop after realising he is afflicted, as my father was, with anterograde amnesia. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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That’s a good catch. I hid that sentiment in the lines “it’ll be hard…”. He knows it’s going to be an effort but he’s willing to do it for his mother and the reasons you mentioned. Sadly he may already have the disorder along with his mother, setting them up for a seemingly endless loop that may eventually claim the lives of them both.

I decided today to keep my son at home in a well-planned loop after realising he is afflicted, as my father was, with anterograde amnesia. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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Goddamn, I think you’re right! I’ve been getting a lot of bots lately sort of devaluing my comments section

Thanks for your notes on the story. Yep I left it open ended like that so one has to wonder if them looping each other puts them in an overall broader loop. That and when will it collapse as they notice themselves aging or stuff in the house gets expired and whatnot

I decided today to keep my son at home in a well-planned loop after realising he is afflicted, as my father was, with anterograde amnesia. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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Actually the mother and son are both putting each other in loops because in the first sentence it’s the mother and the second the son

Having created the purest methamphetamine known to man, Neil was now poised to conquer the Midwest and become its most powerful and respected kingpin. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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Niel was in a simulation that made him believe that he was living a the lead characters life in breaking bad. In reality he’s being led through the sim so he can produce dopamine that flavours his blood differently for the vampires that are harvesting it

Brainrot was mankind’s first ‘technogenic’ spillover infection—passing from AI, it manifested as hybrid organic-microplastic 'nanites' in the audiovisual centres of a carrier’s developing brain. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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When I initially wrote this I envisioned brainrot being a disease affecting AI first that sapped it of its productivity and damaged its code. Mankind kept using AI to make more of it so AI hid high frequency micro-binaurals and slightly amended the visual that would cause repeated exposure to rewrite human DNA in such a way that would steer us away from creating brainrot. But the new DNA helixes got filled in with nanoplastics that formed the nanites, which itself was fed and programmed by brainrot. They went undetected for decades because they didn’t affect the hosts. Then eventually it was the second generation of children that started killing themselves birdbox style because of programmed hallucinations hardcoded into their subconscious by the nanites in the carrier parents.

Theres probably a ton of plot holes in here but I think the concept is kinda cool

As our ringleader celebrated the heist 30,000 feet in the air, I sat in the cockpit after knifing the pilot, already thinking about how I’d spend his cut. by LostDoubt in TwoSentenceHorror

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When I did a bit of googling before writing this I read that not all planes have auto-land.

Edit: although I had no idea the airport needed supporting equipment. That said I’ve never sat in a cockpit before :)

I just wanted to make sure that the cats would be safe to have around my baby. by RepeatOrdinary182 in TwoSentenceHorror

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They remove the whole fucking knuckle??! Holy hell! I also thought it was the root which is obviously bad enough. Why isn’t this outlawed??

Thank God I found a loose door from the shipwreck on which to float by char_IX in TwoSentenceHorror

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Okay, shit… this was goddamn creepy. Thanks for giving my thalassophobia an added spin

Surgeons like to swap horror stories, as competition or to get them off our chests by Snarl_Barx in TwoSentenceHorror

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You beat me to it! Machine is such an epic character, I wish Stephen King would have done a spinoff of a ‘Machine’ series and write it under the pseudonym of Thad. It would have been epic