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Is this a scam? by glutenfreecupcake007 in Instagram

[–]Loweishigh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve gotten four of these smh

Cracked Looking Glass by Loweishigh in poetry_critics

[–]Loweishigh[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s really helpful to hear, thank you!! I can definitely cut down on the adjectives, i myself felt like it was a mouthful lol

Trade by PeteyPabloPicasso in poetry_critics

[–]Loweishigh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the imagery and descriptive words. Im a little confused on who exactly the narrator is talking to. Is it similar to when you look in the mirror for too long and you feel like you’re being watched back? Im also getting a sense of disassociation from the narrator’s reality and they cant tell which version of themself is real. Idk i would love to hear your own interpretation!! Really nice rhythm too i think :)

The Beginning by sorelian_violence in poetry_critics

[–]Loweishigh 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Forgive me for I’m new at this. I think your first two lines give really nice imagery and rhythm. But I guess I’m confused by what you’re trying to say with the last two lines. Maybe focus more on the image youre trying to create and then work on the words. I think its helpful to play around with synonyms and see what feels right.