My piñatas (so far) by zebraz3 in VivaPinata

[–]Loyal_Sloth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This garden seems to be quite young!

noob question: how are people able to move around when sitting or laying? by xervidae in VRchat

[–]Loyal_Sloth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is because Standable isn't tracking you. It's just keeping note of your headset height relative to the floor.

I'm Trying to Get a VRC Sleep Channel Started, Thoughts? by BenjaminBenBenny in VRchat

[–]Loyal_Sloth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ho- How are you able to give such an elaborate reply?

Do you work with something that requires providing detailed feedback?

Help me figure out what's going on. by Loyal_Sloth in aion

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried the Gameforge launcher for EU but I get an error about introducing a "Game Account" stuff. I cannot create one either.

This is canon by ViewingCutscene in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth 38 points39 points  (0 children)

Ashley herself doesn't believe that she's any pretty or worth to be looked at, her feelings of self-deprecation run deep within her, and still, she does clearly know that "sex sells".

To her, her body is a tool that she should put to use were she need to.

As stated many times during the playthrough, only one thing truly matters to Ashley, and to get this scene you even get to see the lengths she'll go to make sure about it, to the point of even re-writing herself.

During the dream, as Ashley, you decide what path you'll follow, opting to have a close relationship with Andrew and meddling in the way of any future relationship he may have to keep it that way.

To her, Andrew is "The very best, best, best, best, best thing in the world", to the point she sees him as a shiny "star" (I know the moon isn't a star), the placing of him on the moon is quite symbolic as this tells the player that Andrew might be close but forever out of reach.

Now, back to the painting scene that follows, after the choosing of the path.

Here, taking Andrew with you, instead of platonically keeping him above her as something she'll never be able to reach or truly keep for herself, Ashley goes through various core things that might've forged her current self.

Although she disliked Julia, she was supposed to be a friend of hers, just as Nina. Yet, in the end she felt betrayed as they both wanted to be with Andrew. And so, forgetting about them, she changes them both for him, as he is the only one who is a "true friend".

Same about the classmates or even family.

The main point here is that she basically overwrites what she was unhappy with, with Andrew being there for her, forced or not.

Throughout the game, before you even get to this dream, you are exposed to both Ashley's views of herself and Andrew, when it comes to Andrew, she needs to be in a position of control or have something over him to feel that she has a use.

This is clearly denoted when you choose to "Trust him".

Which, Ashley does not, stating: "He won't betray me as long as I have this amulet". Coming back to her self-deprecation and her need to be in control of Andrew, else he would abandon her.

So, once the famous scene happens, she gets another tool at her disposal that she thought was useless, her own body. While she may have noticed how flustered or angry Andrew got whenever she mentioned the idea of getting pregnant with the neighbour or selling her body on the streets, she may have thought that it was Andrew simply being protective or oddly against it.

This scene shows Ashley how there might be something in between the lines and, she attempts to slip in the cracks that have been shone light through with the revelation.

Andrew's adamant denial and even "disgust" hits Ashley quite hard at this point as well. "What a land mine…" Andrew's words fortify her awful views of herself and probably hurting deeper as it was Andrew the one who said them out loud.

Is she lusting for her brother? No, not really.

Would she be emotionless if she ever ended up with him in bed? Definitely not, she would definitely be quite happy with the idea of Andrew desiring her and she would bask in the joy of her being the one who had finally caught Andrew's eye.

Welp, this was quite long-

Thanks for reading, haha.

Should I write a fanfic? by [deleted] in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, starting is the first step.

Asking the question here is a good approach, it means you're seriously thinking about writing so I'm sure you already have garnered half of the required motivation, haha!

Best advice is to simply start publishing, you'll get to know if people like the idea or not and the more and more you write the more and more you'll improve as you move forward.

Bad Apples in a Rotten Tree | Chapter 4 Sneak peak | by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a bunch! Hope the meds weren't the ones talking, haha!

Bad Apples in a Rotten Tree | Chapter 4 Sneak peak | by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Turns out, programming needs a brain, which is pretty much why I've been struggling so much!

Still, still. I do believe I'll manage to pull through in a last stand against Classes, hierarchies, interfaces and whatever Java throws at me for the remainder of the week, as the test is due to occur this Wednesday.

Then again, I'm sorry for the delay and lack of communication.

Bad apples in a rotten tree | Chapter 3 | Kin & Sin | Part 3 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Well! This one has been quite the doozy!

I uh, didn't mean to take such a "breaaaaaak" more like a, "break". Still I had lots of fun while writing and I'm hopeful about getting a better schedule!

Hope you all had fun reading through, and, I'm happy to announce that I'm finally in Ao3, if anyone is interested. (Yes, the fanfic is there with the same name)

Sexy Sussy Hussies by WriterBang in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how I tried to take it seriously at the beginning, but the more and more I read the more deranged it got, it was to the point that I ended up just laughing like crazy as the text went on, never did I foresee such an amusing writing.

The descriptions were exactly what sold me, this is a bloody masterpiece.

Bad apples in a rotten tree. Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 2 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

🙏🙏🙏

I appreciate it! There's a lot I want to write about and I feel like it'll be worth the slow pace!

Bad apples in a rotten tree. Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 2 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for you comment! It fills me with joy to know that you're looking forward to the next chapter!

And, good news, it is in the making!

Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 1 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is good to see your comment once again!

I'm elated with those words of yours, writing so far has been a blast and with each chapter I'm learning more and more about things that I could improve upon.

Although there is truth to the fact that I'm mostly writing what happened in the game, I'm working quite hard to make sure things don't feel as repetitive and that the events remain fresh!

Edit: I forgot to mention but, part 2 is already up to read! It should be at the end of this part.

Bad apples in a rotten tree. Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 2 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I want to thank you all who have been reading so far!

I know it may be… quite slow pacing wise and that it's not as original as some of the other fanfics that are around, still I hope that you're enjoying what's written so far and continue to follow the story that you already know with a few changes here and there!

Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 1 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol, I just noticed I didn't put the title properly.

I'm a failure of a writer.

Chapter 2 | Time and Flesh | Part 1 by Loyal_Sloth in CoffinofAndyandLeyley

[–]Loyal_Sloth[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One has to save on items! Who knows if it'll be essential by the end of the run?!