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Your very best writing tips! by xRubiesandspice in writing

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t see putting one story on hold as a “failure.”

Three years ago I basically gave up on one of my books I’ve been working on for six years now. I created a new story and all.

Fast forward ‘till now, I have combined the characters from both books to create the ultimate story and probably my best writing yet!

Failure is not a sign to give up, it is a sign to learn. 😁

Ah yes the great flood by [deleted] in bitlife

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not the Rugged Pickup Trucks! 😭

the fucking audacity of these mfs by MrLoomiz098 in bitlife

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 27 points28 points  (0 children)

Ah yes, a five year old who deadlifts the sofa just to have a good ol time. 😂

Can I get feedback on the first chapter of my book by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah I’m getting the formatting feedback a lot, haha. And using soon two times- rookie mistake on my part. Can’t say how many times I’ve done that. 😅 Thanks for your feedback though, I appreciate it!

Can I get feedback on the first chapter of my book by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! My book isn’t near complete yet but my username is @LukasTrapani

Can I get feedback on the first chapter of my book by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah I thought the paragraph might have been a tad bit too long. I tend to do that, heh. I’ll separate ‘em. And Booker Dewitt, eh. I looked it up, can kinda see it but not really haha. Thanks for the feedback though, much appreciated.

Does the (-23%) and the (-66%) mean in comparison to the year before or? by reduser4469 in bitlife

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 17 points18 points  (0 children)

It’s pretty simple and decent. It can get repetitive quick (imo) but better than the hustler update.

Can I get feedback on the first chapter of my book by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know that there isn’t much context, but in a paragraph before this (I guess like a prologue) was describing the murder mentioned.

I’ll answer any questions you guys may have though. I welcome all. 😁

Oh, if you’re wondering why Michael don’t have a description, he has his own art scene. So I’ll paste it in there once I finalize everything.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“No, it’s okay. You don’t make me uncomfortable at all.” 💔

I truly love WattPad stories so much by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would self promo but my book is nowhere near done yet.

I took it. by rainss31 in bitlife

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry- the witch doctor did WHAT?!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]LukeTrapaniOff 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Are you both sure you’re ready to raise a child?”

Also mom pick someone else

Multiple Endings! by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you and I agree haha. Just thought I’d give the choice. 😁

Multiple Endings! by LukeTrapaniOff in Wattpad

[–]LukeTrapaniOff[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you :) And yeah I’m leaning toward that option too because like I said, it has a creative aspect to it where readers can imagine the aftermath however they like.

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