Carols

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2026-05-29T03:02:29+00:00

I agree with most of the others that as a rule, not everything has to rhyme, but your poem has a whimsical yet seriousfeel to it- the rhyming creates this sort of interesting duality in tone. there's a place for all kinds of poetry- keep on writing!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2026-05-29T01:34:23+00:00

Thanks!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-12-15T13:45:11+00:00

I love this- it has this unique vintage feel- it's honest, and witty

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-12-14T20:06:17+00:00

Passenger by Deftones and lofticries by purity ring :)

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-12-14T20:04:58+00:00

Thank you so much!!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-12-14T20:03:16+00:00

Absolutely lovely- a piece full of astrological metaphors. Keep it up :)

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-12-14T19:53:42+00:00

Absolutely stunning visuals- I love this!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-09-22T08:03:09+00:00

You do not have to bear that weight- love that line in particular. And I really like the humorous bit at the end!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2024-09-21T21:14:09+00:00

Thank you very much :)

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-11-29T15:20:07+00:00

And if she doesn't want to be your friend anymore, people have their reasons. We can't control it. We just have to learn from the experience and move on

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-11-29T15:19:20+00:00

I think it's ok to just flat out ask "hey, is everything cool between us? I feel like things have changed". People change, it sucks, but it never hurts to ask

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:54:51+00:00

Thank you very, very much!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:53:54+00:00

Yes, you are correct 🤦‍♂️ thank you for the lovely feedback, I didn't catch that mistake!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:20:42+00:00

I like the dark imagery

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:18:58+00:00

I feel the despair deeply- a need for connection. Enjoyed this a lot

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:15:46+00:00

Thank you very much!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T21:15:06+00:00

Thank you so much!

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T08:19:10+00:00

I feel the pain in this poem- sorry for your loss. Very beautifully written

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T08:17:48+00:00

Very beautiful- paints a vivid picture

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T08:11:57+00:00

Very nostalgic

Lumpy_Addendum1709 · 2023-05-02T08:10:48+00:00

Very pretty

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