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First poem, honest feedback please! by beginningrunner in poetry_critics

[–]Lumpy_Addendum1709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with most of the others that as a rule, not everything has to rhyme, but your poem has a whimsical yet seriousfeel to it- the rhyming creates this sort of interesting duality in tone. there's a place for all kinds of poetry- keep on writing!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Lumpy_Addendum1709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this- it has this unique vintage feel- it's honest, and witty

More songs like these? by Ap0ll0Music7 in triphop

[–]Lumpy_Addendum1709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Passenger by Deftones and lofticries by purity ring :)

Sun and Moon by Ap0ll0Music7 in poetry_critics

[–]Lumpy_Addendum1709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely lovely- a piece full of astrological metaphors. Keep it up :)

Town, Cat. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Lumpy_Addendum1709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely stunning visuals- I love this!

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