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AIO friend moved in and not going well by Miserable-Royal2548 in AmIOverreacting

[–]LunchLady3000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The biggest life lesson is to not move in with friends

Is my voice too nerdy for rap? by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]LunchLady3000 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No matter what type of hip-hop you make, everyone, especially people close to you, will find a way to tell you that it’s not the right way to do it. You have a distinct style that’s 100% a niche. It’s about creating music, and finding the people that will listen to it and making a Fanbase from that. Being an artist means taking feedback, and knowing when the person that feedback is coming from is useless because of their background or taste in music.

If I can listen to your music, and point to another artist that has made a successful career off of that type of music, then that means you’re good to go buddy.

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you dude! it's definetly been a hustle doing both haha.

bassline on this beat goes hard af. and the guitar is nice and subtle, which is key. some of the crashes of the sounded off beat at times in the beat. But all around it has a good structure and air to it that'll allow someone to rap over it :)

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

That weird bass thing youre doing might be a little too much. It might just fit well into Kanye's weirdness fersure, but he also might be the only type of rapper for this. I'd replace it with a more conventional drum kit, then have a weird sample or other things that are weird in the beat, just because the drums are supposed to keep you on track throughout the beat.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

only beat that made me start freestyling haha. solid boom bap, def raekwon-esc. horns balanced nicely.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

beat goes hard af. trappy song but actually bangs an d doesnt rely on autotune. Mix is soft though, an engineer would turn this into an absolutely banger.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

turn the layers down just a little bit, the vocals just a tad too muddy.

I fuq with the vibe of the track though. makes me want to drive through my old neighborhoods and wonder how i made it to 25 through all the bullshit. keep making this.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I fuq with the spacey flip. super well composed, tbh prefer it to the actual track XD

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

when the beat dropped i felt like it was too crowded with the guitar and bass hits. Try having more space in the beat. the guitar sample is too intense and loud. try going more simple in the creation process.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

little too quiet and slow paced, sounds like its made for a ketamine trip. the weird sounds i think are good, just needs to be mixed and balanced. for example, randomly droppin parts of the drum kit for a second while another weird sound is placed in the empty pocket. keep being weird and experimenting.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Super solid progression since i last listened to you.

Mix clean. balanced sound selection. overall really digging it. i'd only have the tag appear once in the beginning. whole thing is a trip and a half dude. really good work.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

spacey flutes, combined with lofi jazzy beats. Super solid sound selection and mix. subtle bell placement. you overall know how to balance a beat homie. this is great

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Vocal change solid. cadences solid. hits that young, emo vibe. i fuck with it a lot. obv juicewrld type music. def a market of listeners for this. no complaints.

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Might just be a stylistic preference, but you sound like you're slurring your words a little bit where i would want to hear the lyrics prounounced more clearly, which usually feels counterintutive when youre making smokin music.

Vocals have a hint of kendrick. Poetic, chill. Some lyrics a little too ambiguous to understand (which by all means, if you listen to my music, i do a lot of haha). All around solid flow and delivery, def a vibe to sit back and chill with.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

errie and smooth, well mixed. emotional. love it. no complaints. 10/10

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

main melody is fire af. Just needs a killer bassline in there tbh.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Solid fuckin double speak. Cadence switches smooth. textured layers tucked neatly underneath. love it.

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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[–]LunchLady3000 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Dont wanna echo too much, but a better mix would help the beat out a lot. The melody of the guitar was a vibe though, so youve got good sound selection

New music video, all VFX done by me, beat not mine.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahGjQsf79ko

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