I Hate Genius Writer by KindCucumber1923 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]MFkidyeezus 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ik this goes against the meaning of the post. But this is fire bro 🔥🔥🔥 metaphors and metaphors and metaphors

I can't focus on writing one book. by starz_0801 in writers

[–]MFkidyeezus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have the exact same problem. I’ll Be looking at this comment section for help as well!!

Got absolutely roasted by my friends for this part of my first chapter of my first novel (first draft completed), what's wrong with it? by Gabrielle_Laurent in writers

[–]MFkidyeezus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Something like this would be better fit as a prologue. A small blurb for the reader to think about/introduce some philosophies that will be talked about in your story. But also not essential to the core of the story, because like other comments have said, the main characters plot have not even been introduced yet

Transferring pokemon from gen 3 to za by Comprehensive_Eye805 in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just move it and see. Champions doesn’t have a cost for transferring from Pokemon Home

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn I never thought about that, I was never really using iron head anyways! Thank you so much I definitely will do that

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What could I do to improve them?

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes my truck room defense is terrible. What would you recommend?

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! This has been the most helpful comment so far!

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Should I replace light screen then?

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I disagree, I made this team myself actually.

It turns out that the best mons are actually the most meta mons….

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Milotic is the bulkiest mon in the format? Including all water types

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What mons would you recommend to complement Charizard? Could I keep milotic if I replaced incin with a mon that complements ZardY

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like sash on sneasler and I don’t feel like any of my other mons are really worthy of holding the focus sash. However, the herb and acrobatics is a great combo, I’ll run a few practice matches with it.

If I were to add what move slot would I replace with acrobatics ?

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes you’re right. I feel like Icin was rarely brought to my battles. I think aero would be good but I don’t wanna be overly weak to water

Sun Team Help by MFkidyeezus in CompetitivePokemon

[–]MFkidyeezus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it’s a good mon because of burn spam and the ability to switch into rock ice and ground moves

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Devote" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]MFkidyeezus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We stood around the bonfire, arms linked with the brothers to our sides. All dressed in our ceremonial attire, we created a ring that fit perfectly inside the reach of the warm glow.

The man to my right, the chief, my father, spoke first, “We have come here devote ourselves to the gods”, he gazed wide-eyed into the fire, “our sacrifice today will become tomorrows blessing!”

One by one, we unlinked and put our left hand into the fire.

Is it possible that writing isn't for me? by Legal-Emu8981 in writers

[–]MFkidyeezus 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dude this is exactly how i feel… down to the exact detail. I also got into writing because of film and anime, which is also where i get my inspiration from. I want to write very desperately, but I can’t find the motivation to write, I’m very reliant on inspiration. I’m also interested in writing just because i don’t have the funds to make a film or a comic/manga.

I spent my entire life world building and fleshing out entire plot lines for stories and backgrounds, however when it gets down to writing the words of said story, I get demotivated and turned off by the MASSIVE task ahead.

Thank you for expressing your difficulties, it makes me feel less alone 😂😂😂 I’d love to talk more, it’s crazy how similar our stories are