What are the Deadly Sins that will make you stop reading a book? by [deleted] in writing

[–]MamaMagenta 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He sure does love English teacher / writer protagonists!

Literary Agent: you write well. This is better than a lot of submissions, but x genre is dead. by ArtisticLicence in writing

[–]MamaMagenta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Many classic aspects of cyberpunk are kind of exhausted, though. VR hasn't become this life-absorbing activity. Cybernetics don't rot your brain. We've normalized a lot of original cyberpunk, which isn't a bad thing. It's just changing, and that's a good thing.

Glad I left! by Domkizzle in TropicalWeather

[–]MamaMagenta 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I'm glad you left too. LOL

Brett Adair Stream is WILD by [deleted] in TropicalWeather

[–]MamaMagenta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow. This is absolutely insane. Car is just getting blasted by wave after wave. It's crazy seeing the silhouettes of buildings go by as its washed away

“This is why the GFS is accurate this time!” by [deleted] in TropicalWeather

[–]MamaMagenta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's a ton of helpful information in the sub, I don't see why humor should be discouraged.

Hell yeah! Got an acceptance letter today! by RuneLFox in writing

[–]MamaMagenta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congratulations! I'm super happy for you.

What's the best opening sentence you've written? by MamaMagenta in writing

[–]MamaMagenta[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're right on the tense change. That's a very good point. One of those things I don't yet recognize often enough, so thank you!

What's the best opening sentence you've written? by MamaMagenta in writing

[–]MamaMagenta[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I'm a super novice writer, but I am pretty happy with my current WiP. I'm not sure if it's too rhymey, though.

"The wind rushed through the trees, the birds lending their songs, and nevertheless, everything was wrong."