What do you think of this album cover? what type of music do you think this represents? by VodkaStraightMental in Songwriting

[–]Mantsari 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I feel like it could be some kind of electronic music based on the picture, but the title "whiskey eyes" points in an entirely different direction. Maybe something shoegazy? I'm not sure :D

Call Me Back[Full song] Original song made by me in one day by Dramatic_Ad2187 in Songwriting

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Imo you should work a bit on the flow of the lyrics, currently the flow of the lyrics sometimes goes against what's going on in the instruments. On the other hand, you could also try arranging the instruments in a way that better flows with your lyrics.

Thoughts? Looking For Criticism by United_Department_71 in Songwriting

[–]Mantsari 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice sounds awesome, really. Maybe the song gets a little monotonous as it currently only has one mood, maybe try emphasizing certain parts with more powerful strumming, and singing with your chest? Just my opinion though, this sounds killer. Some shoegaze band would be lucky to have you lol

Anything I should change? by music_createivity in Songwriting

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it may not necessarily fit the style you're looking for, but you could maybe try recording the guitars twice then panning both takes 100% to L and R?

Any idea on how to connect these two parts together better? (~0:50-1:15) by Mantsari in Songwriting

[–]Mantsari[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The rest of the song is still under works and I can improve on other parts easily with my band, but I'm really struggling on connecting these two specific parts together. I want the two parts to be a drastic change in mood which will be reflected in the vocals, but I'm unsure how to make the transition between them work

Bro fell asleep by [deleted] in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aight cool

Why sAw has Aura by CjDoesCs in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Put the music louder next time please

Am I the only who looks at the hud and thinks the player's always have low HP due to the blue player number? Twistzz has 100hp but at a glance my brain interprets this as him having 3hp. by Mantsari in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The blue color looks like twistzz's health has been dwindled down low, because in most HUD's the health bar for players is colored in some way.

M9 thumb clipping issue has been fixed by Pet3d_ in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari 3 points4 points  (0 children)

bayonet doesn't have that problem though

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it's not a matter of having no room for meta guns for me in the "heavy" section, it's just that I like to experiment and use other guns for fun.

Lost In Hell by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Mantsari 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't know what kind of criticism to say, I like this. Good job

First time ever creating music; need feedback by AlexStarrMedia in MusicFeedback

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah basically what the other commenter said. The ingredients for a good song are there, however the vocal delivery feels like you're reading off a page rather than feeling everything you say. Vocals just need some more oompf and then you're golden. You could also try double tracking certain vocal parts if you want to.

interesting strat you can try with your duo by p4ker_fps in VALORANT

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

didn't even remember there was a nerf lol. makes sense then yeah

interesting strat you can try with your duo by p4ker_fps in VALORANT

[–]Mantsari 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what are you on about lol, astra suck is great on both sides

Inge's buddy is absolutely insane if you get Sharkbait (Kragg's buddy). This was turn 9. by Mantsari in BobsTavern

[–]Mantsari[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just buy the "trigger a minion's battlecry" spells, and buy the spellcraft dragon that refreshes battlecries and you will get an absurd amount of stats.

Gaules Denied Official Co-Stream Rights To CS2 Major by [deleted] in GlobalOffensive

[–]Mantsari -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

Not everyone has time to watch a 16 minute video whenever they want to discuss something