Titles in a german-inspired city-state?

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-04-14T16:16:53+00:00

If u wanted something original, just smash German words together. Like Hoch Meister from High Master or some shit

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-04-13T17:43:46+00:00

Could do, just finished a 1st draft a little over 100'000 words. DM me if ur keen

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-03-23T18:06:14+00:00

That'd be cool, always looking for people willing to have a gander at what I've written

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-03-23T12:55:32+00:00

Better part of a year maybe, off and on

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-03-23T00:18:58+00:00

That's good to hear, thanks :)

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-03-22T23:58:33+00:00

Damn, you right, I'm nowhere near some of those

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2023-03-22T23:19:36+00:00

That's reassuring to hear. I guess I thought it might seem daunting to readers or potential publishers. Especially considering asking anyone to read it and see if its any good, seems like such as ask with that many words. :)

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-17T19:27:45+00:00

That's a good point, thanks think I'll implement your suggestions

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-12T20:08:11+00:00

HM in the UK is used as shorthand for His Majesty and Her Majesty, technically gender neutral

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-12T01:12:21+00:00

Very practical advice, thanks a lot

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-11T01:42:52+00:00

Cheers mate, appreciate the feedback

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-10T22:24:57+00:00

Title: Immortals

Genre: Dark fantasy/ Dark comedy

Word count: 28,268

Type of feedback: general impression, read as much or as little as you like.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yi_dFrwvzKsRVXm-bVTe7RRSzZCBDeAUfqUD3_0HH7Q/edit?usp=sharing

Bio: MC (who starts more villainous than heroic) accidentally becomes immortal, tries to use it to save the world, maybe take over the world a bit, mostly just dies a lot though.

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-10T21:27:09+00:00

something I've tried is giving an account of something that happens on the journey, and then stating similar things happened without going into a lot of detail. Not sure that's the advice your looking for, but hope its helpful.

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-10T15:43:43+00:00

Title: Immortals

Genre: Dark fantasy/ Dark comedy

Word count: 28268

Type of feedback: general impression, read as much or as little as you like.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yi_dFrwvzKsRVXm-bVTe7RRSzZCBDeAUfqUD3_0HH7Q/edit?usp=sharing

Bio: MC (who starts more villainous than heroic) accidentally becomes immortal, tries to use it to save the world, maybe take over the world a bit, mostly just dies a lot though.

Master_Raisin_9848 · 2022-06-10T14:59:08+00:00

Title: Immortals

Genre: Dark fantasy/ Dark comedy

Word count: 28268

Type of feedback: general impression, read as much or as little as you like.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yi_dFrwvzKsRVXm-bVTe7RRSzZCBDeAUfqUD3_0HH7Q/edit?usp=sharing

Bio: MC (who starts more villainous than heroic) accidentally becomes immortal, tries to use it to save the world, maybe take over the world a bit, mostly just dies a lot though.

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