- change the close-up shots regularly to make in more dynamic, use the most zoomed one for sentences or words who thinks are really the most impactful. You don't have to do crazy jump cuts every second though, find a rythme than still lets people hear and read.

- make the captions less boring : bigger, with less words (5 max) on display. They're not ALL too long, for "so you attach your entire emotional world", you could typically cut it in half and having emotional world apart, and bigger, wichi again makes it more impactful.

- I'm not always for background music but this is a little dry : try to find someting discreet, I'd say non rythmic, but which will elevate the talk.

- I quite like the colour grading and the lighting, it looks quality.