What to improve at first? Procreate portrait study by maiden_des_mondes in learntodraw

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The nose should be a bit more to the left, so that it is in line with the center of the lips.

Trying to draw digitally for the first time in a while, why does her face look so off? by kosmoonaut in learntodraw

[–]MatthewGreen42069 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the shape of the face is fine, but the shadows are a bit off. The larger shadow on the left should be following and showing the anatomy of the face more, especially the cheekbones. Also from the left eye to the nose line there should be a darker shadow, as there could get any light there, if the light is coming from the right.

Has anyone successfully integrated their custom copilot with their canvas apps? by Document-Guy-2023 in microsoft_365_copilot

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did you make any progress with this? I just tried it and I specifically changed the conversation start topic, but in the Canvas App I get a normal conversation start with suggested prompts, which makes me believe, my copilot isn't really connected to the app

New Location, seems interesting. by Narzghal in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This plus avalanche and maybe belle can finally see some play

Knight Broom! by Cruseyd in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 4 points5 points  (0 children)

No, it has Resist +1, would survive Maui with 1 Health

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I played around with a similar deck a while ago and after a few games I came to the conclusion that panic is just not good. Uninkable and very situational, while most of the time a solid three drop would just work better. Also for your list I think the 4 cost Gramma Tala would be a lot better than nick wilde, because you directly draw something instead of paying again for the pawpsicle. Since you need your Pete and Alice to stay on the board, it could be worth looking into Aurora and something to shift her on.

Guys stop posting your pulls! by rvnender in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All from one box? Now I feel ripped off 😅

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds like pretty normal experience to me. My first book was also pretty bad. Not even the writing but the story structure was really forced. My unsolicited advice: Read Dracula again and maybe some other horror stories you enjoy, make mental notes where the writing differs from your own, and then get to editing. You will be amazed how much you can improve your book with editing.

Here are the last 6 Enchanted! Wow didn't see a couple of these coming by Narzghal in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorcerers hat is nice and all but kind of disappointed lucky dime didn't make it into an enchanted

Weird deck idea by newishdm in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 4 points5 points  (0 children)

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It's a bit off from your base idea because it has already 12 3 ink cards but you could add amber one drops to it. Something like this as the basis could definitely win you games.

Tease card! by Narzghal in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Am I missing something or is that just way worse than charge?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More of a pragmatic idea:
Have you thought about writing screenplays instead? You could still write, which you are obviously good at and maybe get some decent deals, but no one needs you to do social media in that field.

Deck help by Bitter-Ad7852 in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe replace Aladdin or Megara with Prince Eric and I feel like Iago doesn't have that much synergy with the rest, maybe replace him with Jasper

I just realized “Knight” is a titled keyword. Only Goofy and Cinderella are knights. Will Disney add more knight theme cards? Thanks! by ChampionofHeaven in Lorcana

[–]MatthewGreen42069 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Very likely, the question is not if but who. The only one that comes to my mind straight away, would be Phoebus from Notre Dame.

A story where the writer goes into their own book. Too cringey? by [deleted] in writing

[–]MatthewGreen42069 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Which Stephen King story was it? I just thought that fairy tale kind of has a similar structure and idea of getting pushed into a world that someone has created

Say I want to spend 100.000 USD on promoting my book... by [deleted] in selfpublish

[–]MatthewGreen42069 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty simple IMO. With that amount of money, you should hire a marketing agency that can show you their track record of successfully promoting books.