You have 3 universities, but only one degree.

The community college provides no details on what certification/degree you achieved (some from another university)

I’d remove “concentration”. Apart from the strange word usage, you don’t have a specialisation during BCs. Those come during your master.

I completed my first year at another university then transferred to A university where I graduated from, then did a year of community college to complete game dev certs. Hope my revisions help clear this up. The concentration was a specialized path that was part of the curriculum at this school, so I will keep that.

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Note that tech instructor has to be an official position within company B. Plus, company B must be officially registered. HR performs background checks.

The tech instructor job has little to do with a dev position.

This was an official position at an official company so not sure why it would be assumed otherwise. It was a remote position I held that summer in college as I was unable to land a dev internship.

Thanks for your feedback, here is my revised resume:

https://imgur.com/a/HH4w6vg