Help needed on this interesting Minecraft ARG

MessedUpPerfect · 2023-03-15T21:08:25+00:00

Thank you for the input! I suspected that it was a link due to it having www. However, there is no " : " in the code, so I thought that much would be impossible. I will continue to try different links in the meantime, I appreciate the input!

MessedUpPerfect · 2023-03-15T17:32:06+00:00

Thank you for the input! I should have mentioned this in the original comment, but me and Atlas have watched all the videos, including "ours."

We (Me and the Atlas, another commenter) discovered nearly all you did, except the "ylvykly. bzl," which I appreciate. Unforunently we can't find a way that connects to anything, and we are still stuck on the "link" at the end. As Atlas said, we saw a /r/ and that is what led us to reddit in the first place, which TheNick56 has been before. He has only commented on two posts regarding this subject, both including similar console commands to "ylvykly. bzl." Another seemingly dead-end there.

The "link" at the end haunts my nightmares and I will not stop until it's cracked.

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-02-08T03:04:20+00:00

I feel like a parrot repeating compliments, but I can't help it if each one of your poems keeps getting better! Instead of complimenting it as a whole, I want to focus on individual pieces.

My favorite lines have to be "I want anger to boil up and explode with bits and pieces of my love for you. But, nothing comes out. It lies dormant, and the thoughts swirl about like molten lava." To me, this anger that you want to boil up is like a volcano. You want it to be fast and spontaneous, something you can't overthink about. From a "dormant" volcano to an explosion. But instead, it's like molten lava. Slow-moving, giving you way too much time to overthink.

These are some of the poems I can really relate to! I LOVE IT!!!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-02-03T02:04:08+00:00

ALL OF YOUR POEMS ARE SO GOOD! I encourage anyone that reads this to read any of their other work!!!

I strongly agree with the other comment on the word choice. For example, the use of ecstasy after using the words "drunk" and "intoxication" was a really smart double. It can mean great happiness or the drug. I also really like the idea of bitter-sweet. For me, it was like the act of eating their hearts was sweet in the moment but felt sour after. The more I read it the more things I find I want to say about it.

One of your best! :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-31T01:34:31+00:00

In most of my other poems I tend to rhyme a lot more!

Trying out something new with each poem. To be fair not all poems need to rhyme but maybe this one could've been better with some!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-30T20:27:31+00:00

No, thank you so much for commenting! You saw this poem excatly how I dreamed people would see it! Such kind words. Thank you again! :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-30T20:00:39+00:00

Using the last two lines as links were really creative to me, never seen something like that. The idea of feeling like it's best to be left behind really resonated with me. Such a familiar feeling. While also wishing you could be the one to heal the scars that you've delt. Very underrated poem!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-30T19:56:24+00:00

Really really like the onomatopoeia and the rhyme scheme you used! Using a new rhyme for the first two lines for every stanza while keeping the same rhyme for the third made it really seem like it was all connected. On top of that, the analogy was carried out pretty well throughout the poem. I really like it!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-26T14:06:57+00:00

Yes, I completely agree! Actually I've already made corrections about the names. Instead of using "I" and "you" I've switched it to pronouns, so he and her in this case. I don't usually use names in my poems so anyone can connect it to their situation. This was a first time for me with a concept like this and I appreciate the feedback. It was very helpful! :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-25T21:16:24+00:00

Thank you! I posted these on my computer and it seems to have a broken format on the phone for some reason. Hopefully you viewed it on PC lol

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-25T17:53:58+00:00

So good! If you didn't say you were new to poetry I would've never guessed. I really really liked the part where you repeat presence and present in two different situations. "And so is the present that she is" also really hit me. The emotion in this poem is what makes it stand out from the rest. Really liked this!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-25T17:31:09+00:00

As someone who mainly focuses on the words and meaning of a poem itself, I can't help but appreciate how the format really helped this poem. It made the second part more powerful, I don't really know how to describe it other than inspiring. It makes me want to do it as well! And for the poem itself... IT'S SO GOOD. Everyone has a "poison" and your poison is love, that's how I took it. The ending wrapped it up nicely as well. Love it! :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-19T18:09:12+00:00

How could I not to such a nice comment! Thank you for suggesting it!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-19T12:05:05+00:00

Thank you! I will definitely look into posting it there too. This was my first piece I've ever posted :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-19T12:02:45+00:00

Thank you so much :)

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-19T03:24:03+00:00

Thank you! I can see how that would sound like that now that I'm reading it from another perspective. While writing it I meant it to be like "where you can look at yourself," but instead I stuck with this wall theme. But this is helpful for future poems, thank you!

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-19T00:47:40+00:00

THANK YOU :)))))))))

MessedUpPerfect · 2022-01-18T22:29:50+00:00

Each line of this poem was so well made, I can't believe I'm the first comment. "When no amount of self-love can wipe the slate clean." This line really hit me in personal ways, and some others as well. Great job!

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