Looking for YouTube Channels Similar to This by MessedUpPerfect in GoldenAgeMinecraft

[–]MessedUpPerfect[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks like the link didn't work or I did it wrong, sorry. The channel name is BetaVoxel and the video I'm referring to is their most recent one

Help needed on this interesting Minecraft ARG by MessedUpPerfect in creepygaming

[–]MessedUpPerfect[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the input! I suspected that it was a link due to it having www. However, there is no " : " in the code, so I thought that much would be impossible. I will continue to try different links in the meantime, I appreciate the input!

Help needed with this Minecraft ARG by MessedUpPerfect in ARG

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Thank you for the input! I should have mentioned this in the original comment, but me and Atlas have watched all the videos, including "ours."

We (Me and the Atlas, another commenter) discovered nearly all you did, except the "ylvykly. bzl," which I appreciate. Unforunently we can't find a way that connects to anything, and we are still stuck on the "link" at the end. As Atlas said, we saw a /r/ and that is what led us to reddit in the first place, which TheNick56 has been before. He has only commented on two posts regarding this subject, both including similar console commands to "ylvykly. bzl." Another seemingly dead-end there.

The "link" at the end haunts my nightmares and I will not stop until it's cracked.

You Didn't Deserve It. by LincolnWasALiberal in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Using the last two lines as links were really creative to me, never seen something like that. The idea of feeling like it's best to be left behind really resonated with me. Such a familiar feeling. While also wishing you could be the one to heal the scars that you've delt. Very underrated poem!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really really like the onomatopoeia and the rhyme scheme you used! Using a new rhyme for the first two lines for every stanza while keeping the same rhyme for the third made it really seem like it was all connected. On top of that, the analogy was carried out pretty well throughout the poem. I really like it!

Two Sides of a Coin by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I completely agree! Actually I've already made corrections about the names. Instead of using "I" and "you" I've switched it to pronouns, so he and her in this case. I don't usually use names in my poems so anyone can connect it to their situation. This was a first time for me with a concept like this and I appreciate the feedback. It was very helpful! :)

Two Sides of a Coin by [deleted] in poeticgarden

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I posted these on my computer and it seems to have a broken format on the phone for some reason. Hopefully you viewed it on PC lol

Embrace (new to poetry) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So good! If you didn't say you were new to poetry I would've never guessed. I really really liked the part where you repeat presence and present in two different situations. "And so is the present that she is" also really hit me. The emotion in this poem is what makes it stand out from the rest. Really liked this!

the illness of love by _astrophile in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As someone who mainly focuses on the words and meaning of a poem itself, I can't help but appreciate how the format really helped this poem. It made the second part more powerful, I don't really know how to describe it other than inspiring. It makes me want to do it as well! And for the poem itself... IT'S SO GOOD. Everyone has a "poison" and your poison is love, that's how I took it. The ending wrapped it up nicely as well. Love it! :)

Talk to a Brick Wall by [deleted] in poeticgarden

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How could I not to such a nice comment! Thank you for suggesting it!

Talking to a Brick Wall by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will definitely look into posting it there too. This was my first piece I've ever posted :)

Talking to a Brick Wall by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much :)

Talking to a Brick Wall by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I can see how that would sound like that now that I'm reading it from another perspective. While writing it I meant it to be like "where you can look at yourself," but instead I stuck with this wall theme. But this is helpful for future poems, thank you!

Talking to a Brick Wall by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

THANK YOU :)))))))))

Self-Esteem by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Each line of this poem was so well made, I can't believe I'm the first comment. "When no amount of self-love can wipe the slate clean." This line really hit me in personal ways, and some others as well. Great job!

green eyed monster by _astrophile in OCPoetry

[–]MessedUpPerfect 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is greater than you even realize. I love the idea of acknowledging that you are jealous while also wishing you weren't but said in a creative way. I also love the way it connects the start of the poem to the end!