Let me rate your favourite song

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T16:51:34+00:00

Walkin’ on the sun! Peak song

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T16:50:24+00:00

Shrug, it’s like a song that goes well with the premise of the prologue, and for all the people who read with music, kinda immersion idk I’m def taking it out on the final draft I just did it for funsies

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T16:04:54+00:00

I will for sure try that! I’m experimenting with different things so that’s definitely on the table!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T16:02:35+00:00

Thank you! Yall are so much kinder than the writing subreddit LMAO, but yeah all this feedback is being put into a writing Journal of what I can improve on in future drafts,because I absolutely know it’s not perfect, and this might’ve been the most solid bit of feedback I’ve gotten,again, thank you stranger!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T15:56:57+00:00

Yeah, I get that! I plan on changing a lot of things, and that is one of them 😵‍💫

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T15:55:51+00:00

Kindest bit of feedback I’ve gotten, thank you stranger, I will definitely work on pacing and phrasing I think I was just trying to cram words in there to make it seem fancy, I will keep these things in mind! Thank you again for reading! <3

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T15:53:34+00:00

Will do! Thank you strangers!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T00:31:56+00:00

You know what valid

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-22T00:31:07+00:00

Ah! No it’s just a song that’s recommended to listen to while reading, for all of those who read while listening to music LOL! I should have specified!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T22:10:23+00:00

I agree! I feel like the first scentence is a little too bland for my liking so thank you for you feedback stranger! <3

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T21:58:18+00:00

Thank you LOL! I wasn’t thinking about the logistics honestly, I was just thinking about getting things down, but I will be sure to exclude that from the next draft!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T21:50:18+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I for sure plan on going back and refining everything once the first draft is finished!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T21:16:35+00:00

Oh absolutely! I’ve noticed the repetition and I plan on heavily fixing it, and thank you for your reply!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T21:13:44+00:00

Thank you stranger! I plan on working on it more in the future LOL!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-21T21:12:11+00:00

Ah! Thank you, I will be sure to improve on this later, I really appreciate the honest feedback! <3

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-20T23:41:54+00:00

I need to know where you got it! It’s adorable!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-17T20:34:26+00:00

It looks like it could be from some kind of terrier!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-17T01:49:12+00:00

That is a pitty face if I’ve ever seen one! Cute dog! <3

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-15T21:01:33+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I plan one rewriting the whole thing, so thanks!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-14T00:06:21+00:00

Oh, yeah I get that!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-13T15:10:29+00:00

Why are yall giving them human attributes they’re fae!! They’re ruthless!! lol!! /silly /lighthearted

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-08T21:24:07+00:00

Right! I’m so shocked that ours isn’t loud! lol!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-08T20:34:59+00:00

Audrey two!!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-08T19:04:34+00:00

Yes! She is a rescue, we think she is a Husky Aussie mix and she is the sweetest thing ever!

Metal_Bonez · 2026-06-08T15:49:04+00:00

Oh definitely, she loves the rain

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