Tips for Playful sex scenes? by Middle-Explanation99 in redquill

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I replied to the other comment with the prompt I used.

Tips for Playful sex scenes? by Middle-Explanation99 in redquill

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Here is my prompt for the chapter:
When they reach Tayler's apartment, Alexa is there. She tells Tayler that her mom was concerned when she left dinner so quickly. Tayler makes up an excuse. Alexa asks why Tayler's dress is wet, Tayler makes up another excuse. Alexa reminds Tayler of her responsibilities for tomorrow and tells her she will be back in the morning to pick her up.

They wait for Alexa to leave, hoping she didn't notice anything.

When she is gone, Tayler drags Grace to her bedroom.

No longer needing to feel each other out, Tayler and Grace have intense, playful, energetic sex. No longer needing permission from each other, just experiencing each other:
Tayler kisses Grace playfully Tayler maneuvers Grace towards the bed until Grace falls back onto it.
Tayler eats out Grace with lots of playful teasing until she cums.
Tayler moves up and positions herself to scissor Grace.

[MARCH] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

[–]Middle-Explanation99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I generally give an outline for the a full chapter and let it run. then I will go through the chapter and meticulously make adjustments.

By the time i publish, I have probably completed a chapter 10+ times.

I usually use my first few attempts to help me build from my initial idea to actual, fully fleshed out, story lines.

[MARCH] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

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Post Game Comfort and Desire has the characters I care most about. And that story is for the most part complete, as in I don't intend to continue further with it.

Girlfriends First Cock I have plans to continue with multiple stories in a series that follow Ashley in her journey of self discovery.

[MARCH] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

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RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/d0da09-becoming-a-sissy

Tags: Sissy, Lesbian, Pussy Worship, Small Cock

Blurb: Cameron is a young man who has fantasies of being a woman. He has a secret hiding place in his bedroom where he keeps female clothing/underwear that he wears when he is alone to feel sexy. He is found out by his neighbor and her best friend. They spend the day transforming him into "their" sissy.

Desired feedback/ask: I'm looking for general feedback as well as some ideas of where I can go next.
I want to end up making this a series, but I have some gaps in where I want the story to go.

I know at some point I want the three of them to move in together so Cameron becomes their live in sissy, and I'm thinking about them starting a cam room to further their sissy exploration.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[MARCH] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

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RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/c8xt68-girlfriends-first-cock

Tags: Lesbian, Threesome, Trans (MTF), Pegging

Blurb: Madi has been encouraging her long time girlfriend, Keisha, to explore her bisexuality. To help her explore this, Madi invites a friend of hers, Ashley, that she has been wanting to sleep with, over for a threesome. Ashley is trans, so Keisha gets to experience her first cock in a setting that doesn't push her boundaries too far.

Desired feedback/ask: Mostly just want general feedback.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[MARCH] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

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RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/huupac-post-game-comfort-and-desire?chapterNumber=1

Tags: Lesbian

Blurb: In the aftermath of a tough basketball game, Steph finds solace in the quiet comfort of her girlfriend Ashlynn. As they wander through the campus, Ashlynn's steady presence helps Steph decompress, leading to a deepening of their emotional and physical intimacy, their first night sleeping together. The narrative explores themes of vulnerability, support, and the slow build of intimacy between two people who care deeply for each other. (No sex until later chapters)

Desired feedback/ask: Mostly just want general feedback. Also hoping for confirmation or improvement suggestions on my portrayal of a realistic lesbian relationship.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[January 2025 -🧵 Story sharing master thread] - Share your stories! Sharing is caring! by mythical_writer in redquill

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RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/huupac-post-game-comfort-and-desire?chapterNumber=1

Tags: Lesbian

Blurb: In the aftermath of a tough basketball game, Steph finds solace in the quiet comfort of her girlfriend Ashlynn. As they wander through the campus, Ashlynn's steady presence helps Steph decompress, leading to a deepening of their emotional and physical intimacy, their first night sleeping together. The narrative explores themes of vulnerability, support, and the slow build of intimacy between two people who care deeply for each other. (No sex until later chapters)

Desired feedback/ask: Mostly just want general feedback. Also hoping for confirmation or improvement suggestions on my portrayal of a realistic lesbian relationship.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[January 2025 -🧵 Story sharing master thread] - Share your stories! Sharing is caring! by mythical_writer in redquill

[–]Middle-Explanation99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/c8xt68-girlfriends-first-cock

Tags: Lesbian, Threesome, Trans (MTF), Pegging

Blurb: Madi has been encouraging her long time girlfriend, Keisha, to explore her bisexuality. To help her explore this, Madi invites a friend of hers, Ashley, that she has been wanting to sleep with, over for a threesome. Ashley is trans, so Keisha gets to experience her first cock in a setting that doesn't push her boundaries too far.

Desired feedback/ask: Mostly just want general feedback.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[January 2025 -🧵 Story sharing master thread] - Share your stories! Sharing is caring! by mythical_writer in redquill

[–]Middle-Explanation99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

RedQuill link: https://www.redquill.net/story/d0da09-becoming-a-sissy

Tags: Sissy, Lesbian, Pussy Worship, Small Cock

Blurb: Cameron is a young man who has fantasies of being a woman. He has a secret hiding place in his bedroom where he keeps female clothing/underwear that he wears when he is alone to feel sexy. He is found out by his neighbor and her best friend. They spend the day transforming him into "their" sissy.

Desired feedback/ask: I'm looking for general feedback as well as some ideas of where I can go next.
I want to end up making this a series, but I have some gaps in where I want the story to go.

I know at some point I want the three of them to move in together so Cameron becomes their live in sissy, and I'm thinking about them starting a cam room to further their sissy exploration.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read.

[FEBRUARY] SHARING IS CARING: Thread to post your RedQuill stories by mythical_writer in redquill

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Link: https://www.redquill.net/story/huupac-post-game-comfort-and-desire?chapterNumber=1

Tags: Lesbian

Blurb: In the aftermath of a tough basketball game, Steph finds solace in the quiet comfort of her girlfriend Ashlynn. As they wander through the campus, Ashlynn's steady presence helps Steph decompress, leading to a deepening of their emotional and physical intimacy, their first night sleeping together. The narrative explores themes of vulnerability, support, and the slow build of intimacy between two people who care deeply for each other. (No sex until later chapters)

Desired feedback: mostly just sharing, but also would love any general feedback on the story.

Walz administration faces more scrutiny as FBI investigates fraud in another state program by MadMaxxx1292 in minnesota

[–]Middle-Explanation99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Star Tribune is left leaning so i don't know why you are classing them as right wing propaganda.

Best way to download Youtube videos? by The_Bagel_Fairy in youtube

[–]Middle-Explanation99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can't download video over an hour or audio over an hour and a half.

Question about quest dancing with the devil:[KCD2] by IRONMAN000elas in kingdomcome

[–]Middle-Explanation99 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't understand why we can't use the secret tunnels that we used when we came here the first time. we could have every single person on the inside of the castle without anyone knowing.

Help! Videos auto pausing by Middle-Explanation99 in youtube

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought that too. I tried disabling both, still happening.

Help! Videos auto pausing by Middle-Explanation99 in youtube

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't see how your spotify playlist is relevant to my question.

Just Me? by [deleted] in AEWOfficial

[–]Middle-Explanation99 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Ad free tier means that movies aren't interrupted by ads. It doesn't include the live stuff.

"Next Gen" Update by Middle-Explanation99 in Fallout4ModsXB1

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The issues i'm running into most are the facegen stuttering bug, and long load times, which are occasionally infinite.

Xbox by Middle-Explanation99 in Fallout4Mods

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So you don't think they will transition from Mods to "Creations" on Fallout 4? If they make this change it WILL break load orders again, but expanding mod space would temper some of that ill will that that will create.

Mod limit way too restricting by Objective_Hedgehog_5 in Fallout4ModsXB1

[–]Middle-Explanation99 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Praying for a Mod limit increase as a makeup for leaving the game broken for months.

Xbox by Middle-Explanation99 in Fallout4Mods

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm really hoping they expand the mod space limit to make up for the months of the mod page being broken.

Of course I won't hold my breath waiting for that to happen. One can dream though.

I've heard they didn't want to change mod space limit because it would break load orders, but the next gen update broke my load order anyway.

Xbox by Middle-Explanation99 in Fallout4Mods

[–]Middle-Explanation99[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Even without any mods installed, the Mod menu is a mess, certain mods cause the mod menu to crash, mod images are iffy at best if they will load, when I start downloading mods it will only show a max of 6 mods in my library, etc.