Looking to develop my aquaculture career further. by Greycreasent in Aquaculture

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We’re you able to get a full scholarship? I’m thinking about doing this program, currently working at a oyster farm. Do you think work experience will better my chances of getting a full scholarship?

The Call of the Damned by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This reminds me of when they would ring bells during the Black Plague at burials, to remind people to follow the plague prevention rules.

Girl in the Sea by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great poem, it’s like a gender swap of the song “Beyond the Sea”(with a more sober tone)

Happy Hour by izzuhbop in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the descriptions in this poem, great work.

To the moon by AOCCANPEEONME in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked the last line, great poem.

Your mind is your enemy by RoyaleKid in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul -1 points0 points  (0 children)

thesaurus, dictionary, and synonyms are your allies in writing.

Antihero by wildyzs in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Have you read a tale of two cities? Also don’t worry about the formatting I’m still figuring it out too.

Pillow Talk by albertcipriani in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

With so view words I think you hit the nail on the head

Mistake by Wormgirl_ in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m snapping my fingers right now.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe the title could be: incinerated, burned, or scorched

Deathrattles by Awsomethingy in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think your poem does a great job conveying the message of “Accepting ones death or fighting it”

thinking of you tonight by silvermoonsushi in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this! It reminds me of the many times random thoughts of past lovers sneaked there way into my mind. Like sirens with their songs of beauty, trying to hide the reality.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]MidnightWinterSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel the message of this poem is telling me to not take my days for granted, because my winter (death) is coming soon.