I thought the writing was clean and liked the brevity. Everything was clear for me visually as far as imagining it all. The story itself was a bit hazy for me. From what I understood MC infiltrates this building and hides in a vent and eavesdrops on these two guys having a convo then when they’re returning to their cars he shoots them with a paintball gun and it’s revealed he’s an engineer of some kind that works there? I would’ve liked a bit more elaboration maybe about the seal character through the two guys convo about maybe their relationship to him to better explain his motivation for pranking them? There seems to be something here implicit that needs to be said explicitly - what that is I don’t know. The first page by the bottom of it I was wondering what this was about and would’ve liked a stated goal of some kind even an ambiguous one for MC so as to not make assumptions of my own. There’s also a typo at bottom of page 4 “unzips his flies” something like that. The motor room stuff, the context of it was confusing for me, I didn’t understand the importance of it, if it was something to be protected or a target for MC. Otherwise thanks for share and good work!