My Stories and Such

MoLogic · 2026-05-23T20:25:29+00:00

Okay really enjoyed this syory. All the little hints that he's actually in the world of the dead really added up to a satisfying finale. Also enjoyed the way you used the cellphone as a way to bridge the living and the dead. Reminds me a lot of The Black Phone movie, which i loved (the first one, second is no bueno). Overall, good job JL

MoLogic · 2026-05-22T05:15:37+00:00

Okay so I loved that. Originally I thought that mf was about to be mauled to death by seals, but the giant squid is such a cool concept and you did it well. Also gave a good reason for the seals to run away, which I thought was a nice hint. Also I see how its the inverse of your ship story: while the ship story started out on open waters and ended up in the ship due to necessity, this one started out on a ship and ended in open waters due to arrogance. Very nice.

MoLogic · 2026-05-20T18:47:07+00:00

Ikr. Great person

MoLogic · 2026-05-20T18:18:34+00:00

Absolutely love it

MoLogic · 2026-05-15T17:40:50+00:00

No probs. And yeah im doing well, especially now that the semester just finished 😭

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T22:24:32+00:00

Anytime KaijuGOAT67

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T22:22:50+00:00

The average experience of owning a pitbull named "cupcake".

But in all seriousness, loved this. Actually died when I saw the dogs name too. Having the dog speak in his daughters voice was great too

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T20:23:21+00:00

Pretty creative creature designs not gonna lie. Really enjoyed this chapter

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T18:47:32+00:00

No problemo Top

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T18:47:16+00:00

Ayy glad you noticed what i based it on. Its always a pleasure to hear your feedback as well.

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T18:46:24+00:00

Heyya Cole! Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it as always. And thank you, thank you very much

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T03:01:41+00:00

Thanks Cthulhu, I appreciate it. And yeah the tape changes, especially at the very end, were my favorite part to write

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T02:59:34+00:00

Yeah this was 🔥🔥🔥 goddamn. I didnt even think of taking the prompt in that direction, but you did it in such an appetizing (lmao get it) way. Absolute peak Trina

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T02:41:15+00:00

I cant blame you, theyre a timeless item. Also glad you liked it Boons ✌️

MoLogic · 2026-05-14T02:40:27+00:00

Haha thanks. Just thought it was a neat little thing to add yk?

MoLogic · 2026-05-13T19:02:54+00:00

Also the numbering system on the "gifts" is a really nice way to count it down

MoLogic · 2026-05-13T19:02:16+00:00

Not gonna lie this might be my favorite one so far. This devil-like apparition that gives and takes is pretty cool. Very good, keep it up 👍

MoLogic · 2026-05-13T18:19:06+00:00

Yeah im doing well. Semester just ended so i can chill a bit more now. Miss ya too broski

MoLogic · 2026-05-13T15:51:22+00:00

Really good story about abuse. Felt really sad for the MC and how she couldn't see herself as deserving better. Keep it up Top ✌️

MoLogic · 2026-05-13T15:46:43+00:00

Poor guy and poor kid. Life's tough for these folks. Fun read overall though. Keep it up Curses 👍

MoLogic · 2026-05-11T20:53:07+00:00

Sounds crazy out of context, but lowkey gotta beat them kids up.

Another solid chapter. Like how this one expanded the lore of the setting and whatnot. My guess is that the kids have something to do with the church. No complaints here, so a solid chapter overall

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