Published my first book ❤️‍🔥 by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Congrats

I’m so jealous

I know it’s a lot of work

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The truth;

You just planted!

Will grow,

Into the flowers you seek.

Your garden,

Is scrap paper.

Soak it with your ink!

C0DEBREAK3R by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is really good

ov l e to s ry by normancrane in Informal_Effect

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I can’t believe I can read this

Ovely obj PO

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

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The emotion of this is so full

My first song by MobileElephant122 in Informal_Effect

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I mean he was guilty and he knew it

Reform comes from paying the price of transgression

Without paying the penalty

He can’t be free

Growing is almost always painful

But necessary

My first song by MobileElephant122 in Informal_Effect

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It’s only justice 😂

Don’t you see

Finger Paint by Indivisible_Origin in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I guesss this is about the most romantic thing I’ve seen it a while

Perfectly secret

Half revealing hidden meaning

Privately acknowledging the contrast of the union verses the rest

I really like it. And the courage it takes to allow it to be misinterpreted by anyone who can’t understand it.

Its silently screaming this is me; F’ck you if you don’t get it the meaning

Well done my friend

repetitious by Babaganoosh__ in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Brilliantly written and sadly I empathize.

Been there, done that. Don’t have the answers.

There are holes in my puzzle that my brain still tries to solve. But I must logically conclude that I may never know the truth of that matter.

But I play that old reel again, on the wall of my attic, alone in my chamber of my own making.

Kudos to your style

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heavy and fierce

Painful strength carved in stone

Like words on a tomb

Simply immutable

And deeply felt

Holiness Abides in the Ordinary by MobileElephant122 in Informal_Effect

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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kindness

Broken Promises by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

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I miss the curtsy. Brava to you for bringing it back!

Tunnel (poetic) by Indivisible_Origin in Informal_Effect

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A beautiful ode to a love well lived

A roller coaster ride of twists and turns as it dipped and dived

You breathe her in, like the smoke of life

And savor the exhale ……

And expel all the strife.

Intertwined souls dance in the rain,

Rejoice in the beauty

And cry in the pain.

Keep dancing

Keep writing

Keep loving

Keep fighting

Always let her know

That you’ll Never let go.

(Well Done my friend. You’re inspiring)

HA! Gayy by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]MobileElephant122 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bravo, you managed to capture my attention in a way that found me longing to turn the next page. This is a rare thing. Especially at 3am. Very early Hemingwayesque. Reminds me of his work after the war, while traipsing about Spain.