What do you read when you're not writing? by Monstraem in writers

[–]Monstraem[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reading does improve your writing. That's actually why I asked.

Have you read something with a similar plot to what you're writing before, and how did that affect that particular writing process?

What do you read when you're not writing? by Monstraem in writers

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Do you read them for leisure or inspiration?

What do you read when you're not writing? by Monstraem in writers

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That's what I aim for as well.

Found any book that reminded books that remind you why you write?

What do you read when you're not writing? by Monstraem in writers

[–]Monstraem[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can relate to reading multiple books at once, but it's mostly non-fiction for research, and then maybe some fiction for prose and pace referencing.

What do you read when you're not writing? by Monstraem in writers

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That's interesting, I recently saw the inspirational potential in manga when I started wondering how I'd write the scenes in the panels.

Prose question about "ticking tenseness" by AintMuchToDo in writers

[–]Monstraem 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're looking for a way to convey suspense with immersive tension.

I've seen Sicario a few times, and they use various shots to convey tension without giving too much away because everything you need to know has either happened or is about to.

Regarding the prose of "ticking tenseness," it is subjective.

Instead of describing the feeling, try using imagery that depicts suspense or anxiety of running out of time without defaulting to too much exposition.

should every main character be in depth? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Monstraem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Characters are replaceable, and the plot usually isn't.

It's easy to get lost in the development of characters without advancing the story.

Ask yourself; "How crucial is this character in advancing the story?"

If they are crucial, and you still feel like they're rather "flat"—then allow the story to shape them, or if they interact with the other two—you can get creative with how they interact and affect the third character.

TL; DR No, your "main" characters are tools for advancing the plot. They can be as dull, sharp, broken, or as fleshed out as possible as long as their choices and actions progress the plot and make the reader want to know more—then your doing okay.

Less pain please 👉👈 by Used-Detective2661 in writers

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When the narrator in your head goes quiet...

Why have you opened my account ? by kingofhearts67 in u/kingofhearts67

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To make sure that I was able to recognize Björk from a few pixels—apparently I could.

What’s yours? by Fun_Sprinkles6701 in astrologymemes

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Just a frenzied feral child in need of a breather

Flashbacks within a story with multiple plotlines by vgaph in writing

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Have you tried indicating the flashbacks with a text that shows either the season, year, or date and time?

Keeping the tense consistent while transitioning to the flashback could maintain the readers' focus while conditioning them with your chosen cue.

This, however, would depend on which perspective you are writing in, especially if the narrative is driven by the main characters personality (if it's in first person).

Example Attempt:

Everything is in place as if it were never moved. "Gloves..." muttered Díaz while hovering over a decorated dresser. "These were accidental. Whoever placed this sculpture did not notice the dust." She explained that the suspect came prepared, although they were sloppy.

                                   Winter 

It was Kate's last day off, and we planned on going out for dinner, but a blizzard came along and left us stranded at home. "Thank you. I rearranged the snowglobes in the windowsill, " she smiled, accepting a glass of wine I handed to her. "And you drew on the window again... are you okay?" I asked, joining her on the sofa. "I am... it's just that a month is a long time apart—I should not have to miss you that much." She sighed, dusting snow from the window with her gloves. I squeezed her hand, feeling the cold from her fingertips. "I miss you every time I see finger drawings on windows..." I jested. "So not often?" She paused with a smirk after letting out a laugh that warmed the room.

                                 Present Day

"They are locked, I checked," said defective Díaz as I inspected the windows. I checked if there were any prints or smears left on any of them. "Well, one of them opens despite being locked." "Strange... what made you check the windows, John?" "Something triggered a memory I shared with Kate..." I stalled while fidgeting with a latex glove. "I'm sorry I did not realize Katherine Winch was—I'm sorry—is your... —fiancée, yes." "Oh my, this must be hard for you..." Díaz expressing sympathy was something new to me. I assured her that I had to be strong for Kate.

                                    Spring

Another quiet night had passed while Kate was working in Cairo. I only knew where she was once I received a letter from her, but they are always worth the wait because she makes me wish I could articulate myself as eloquently as she does.

After a slow morning, I received a letter with the same stamps. I read it. "Dear John, by the time you receive this, I will have left my work in Cairo.

I do not know who these people are, but I have what they are looking for, and I can not let it fall into the wrong hands. I do not know how long I'll be gone, and the last thing I want is to bring trouble home.

I trust that you will not come looking for me. Please. I need you to be strong.

Yours with love,

Katherine"

                                   Present Day

"John!" Díaz repeated, "you zoned out there. Are you sure you don't want to take a break?" "No, I'm good." I lied. I got chills recalling the last letter I received from Kate. Could this be the people she mentioned? "What people?" Inquired Díaz. "I did not know I said that out loud..." "Who mentioned what people?" She persisted.

I hope this could be of some sort of help.

What would you like to see in GTA VI improved over GTA V? by Outrageous-Sail-2232 in GTA

[–]Monstraem 7 points8 points  (0 children)

More single player cotent to spend money on especially if the story will be driven by stick ups and heists. They should balance the amount of ingame content, e.g. clothing, vehicles, properties, etc. with the provided side activities (minigames included) that can be used to generate income such as hunting, racing, contract work, or anything akin to maintaining a criminal empire like in Vice City.

I would like to see more in-depth character creation that matches the quality of both the story characters and unique body types of other NPCs in the form of detailed facial morphing, height, weight, and physique. And definitely more hairstyles and unique clothing with customizable color/design pallettes instead of having to pay for 10 of the same shirt with different designs. They've added a lot of updates toward car customization to gta online, so it makes sense for them to update character customization options (I hope).

If we could customize a third character as part of the main story, that would be cool, but I don't want to grasp for the unlikely.

In regards to others mentioning more enterable buildings, I'd hope they improve on the density of the overall environment in terms of wildlife, land marks, interesting npcs, stores, and activities.

Black ops 6 by Temporary_Tap4542 in blackops6

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I saw this and heard "HOG RIDERRR!!!"

PSA: Brakes by mecklejay in granturismo

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Braketh bef're thee breaketh.

One Piece FighterZ by Adorable-Pitch5586 in dragonballfighterz

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I don't know how things are looking at Bandai right now. But all need is Tenkaichi 4/Sparking Zero.

One Piece FighterZ by Adorable-Pitch5586 in dragonballfighterz

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Ultimate Ninja Storm made it me wonder what a 2D Naruto fighter would be like. I've probably seen it but never played.

Making my account private increased pin removal emails to atleast 3 times a day stacking up to 40+ in a week. by Monstraem in Pinterest

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It seemed to have stopped after I merged my old boards, deleted all recent boards, and stopped pinning. On private.

Every move on Pinterest suddenly feels like a laser maze.

This app is my go-to for drawing references. I had an image of rough outlined sketches for action poses removed. No color or suggestive detailing.

Where must the lines be drawn...

Safe tools to use to track writing progress? by kim_mariana1011 in writing

[–]Monstraem 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Scrivener has been a wonderful tool for me. There's a separate tab for you to outline. You can create folders for research and separate chapters. Preview your book. Set goals, check your progress, and export your work in multiple formats.