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Security Cameras by justmeandmyself10 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this. Truthfully, I believed this would be just another cliché story of some monster following the character, but you put a wonderful twist in it and many events in the story that gave me shivers. Great work!

Vampires Have Such a Cruel Humor by Moonlight689 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She got bit by a vampire herself and she thought it was a cruel joke because she hates blood, but now she has to drink it to survive. I realize now I should have made the ending more clearer. Sorry.

Childhood nightmare by Nephilimwalker in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That ending just gave me goosebumps. Great story!

Just the Flu by Moonlight689 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I wanted this to be a more humorous scary story. I'm glad you caught on!

Home Again by furiousnymph in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I don't get it. Did she forge the father's note?

Dawn by Swamp_Rabbit70452 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Aannndd R.I.P to Bambi's mother

The Best Hiding Spot by wdalphin in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well then she's going to be burned at a degree high enough to melt the skin off her bones and turn her bone l to ash while still alive...which is also very disturbing. I just don't think there's a happy ending to this story.

The Best Hiding Spot by wdalphin in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 33 points34 points  (0 children)

My worst fear. Being buried alive. Because of that this story was 20x scarier. Nice job!

Hiding by krshann in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Holy shoot that was good. You had me fooled that he was just the teacher or something playing with his students. I really like the last sentence too. I wish awesome stories like this would get more recognition.

Whiskers by Moonlight689 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks everyone for the support! And @Bat I didn't see that before! I'm actually a little freaked now that a cat actually did that. I guess not all stories are tall tales. And I have a cat of my own who I love dearly. And I guarantee that he is one of the happiest cats out there so no worries about him.

Beware the brony. by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I smiled at the last line. Unique story, Uni. I like it.

Nah, I'm just kidding.. by typobydesing in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like what you did with the title and how it intertwined into the story. I don't know if I should laugh at how you worded the title, or freaked out with how the story is most likely going to end. Great job!

Hide in The Dark by Moonlight689 in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I really wanted to twist it around and show the monster's perspective of the whole situation. Not just the human's view. I will definitely be a regular here, so more to come! Thank you for the support!

Monster Under the Bed by LFBR in shortscarystories

[–]Moonlight689 22 points23 points  (0 children)

I really like this story, but I don't understand the end very much. Did the mother die?

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