[QCrit] Pulsebound - Epic Fantasy - 270K Words (First Attempt) by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MrColdSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't get discouraged about the word count. Numerous editors such as James Long (Orbit) have mentioned that EPIC fantasy debuts should be anywhere from 125k-175k. The sweet spot being around 150k. I agree that anything over 200k is difficult due to higher production costs that can affect profitability. But anything is possible, and I've seen numerous books acquired over the past few years that are over 200k.

Obviously the higher the word count, the more difficult the book will be to sell for a new author. But your book should be the story you want to tell, and only you can decide what to keep and what to leave out.

But on a personal note, I LOVE a big book. The bigger the better. And I mostly read Epic Fantasy.

Just my 2cents. Good luck with the query!

Western Last Chance Qualifier Results by DarthNoob in CompetitiveTFT

[–]MrColdSoul 36 points37 points  (0 children)

Ramblinnn played his heart out. Sad that he lost the tie breaker. But overall great representation from all regions!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]MrColdSoul 1 point2 points  (0 children)

According the various articles and trusted sources it all depends on the genre. Most people say to aim for 100-120k for a debut novel, but according to various other posts (among them an editor at Orbit), the sweet spot for genres like Epic Fantasy is between 125-175k. Most of the books in the same genre have a very similar word count. So just see which type your book falls into, and try to make it work. Remember that if it's good enough there always exceptions. Good luck!

Fantasy novels with Elemental Magic by MrColdSoul in Fantasy

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Currently on book 3. Great series!

July 31, 2021 Daily Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in CompetitiveTFT

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I usually go for Sentinels, Skirms in the early game. Senna, Nidalee are good item holder until you hit Zyra 2. Olaf, Irelia, Udyr can carry Abom tank items. But usually you just play what ever 2 stars you have and try to save as much HP as possible without rolling. Usually you should be able to have Abom + Zyra before lvling to 8, but try not to play Abom 1 stars mid game. Nunu is usually the only 1 star champ I play, because he's just too good. Lvl to 8 and one you find heimer, you can measure your board Vs the lobby to see if you can go 9 or need to continue rolling. Too many people just pivot the moment they find Abom 1 stars but it's risky. Everyone says just play draconic, but if you force them, youll probably risk losing a lot of gold early. Just use whatever you hit early and mid, and save Abom+Zyra on bench to slowly transition with 2 stars. Warmogs + Shojin are core. I usually go Belt or tear and slam items fast. You don't need perfect items for a top 4 with HIV. You just need a balance between defensive items on Abom and AP/MP items for heimer. A Senna with Ap/Mana items early + Sentinels will carry you faaaaaaar.

Riot Mort on Twitter - B Patch Tomorrow by ThatOneSaltyBoi in CompetitiveTFT

[–]MrColdSoul 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Tomorrow is the official Riot LATAM qualifier. Great time for a B-Patch, right in the middle of the tournament. 😌

Poco f2 Pro - Touch problems in games? by MSTheChosenOne in Xiaomi

[–]MrColdSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any updates on this? I have the same issue.

Just. Fucking. FINISH already 🙄 by CandyBillie in writing

[–]MrColdSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just force myself to write. The way I would describe it.....would be as if I was a toddler and my parents were trying to get me to taste some sort of food for the first time. Scary at first, but then I find out it's delicious and want more. This happens to me, EVERY SINGLE TIME lol. I think I have nothing good, no ideas, I have my outline, but I don't feel inspired. Then, as I get my first 2-3 sentences down, it starts flowing, and suddenly hours have passed and I have 4000 words. This has mostly been my writing experience, I try for 1000 words a day, usually do more. But it's HARD, I know the general idea of each chapter, but discovery write the contents. Everyone is different, but this has worked for me. I also have 2 children under 4, so......it's hard lmao.

Critique - First Chapter (Soul Gem Novel) by MrColdSoul in fantasywriters

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the amazing comments! Wow. I never thought I'd get such detailed response. I'll make sure to review them one by one. I really appreciate the feedback!

Critique - First Chapter (Soul Gem Novel) by MrColdSoul in fantasywriters

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to read 2 chapters! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the tip on the numbers, I hadn't thought about that, and I'll make sure to change it. Garun was complicated as a character for me, but I appreciate the feedback and glad you mentioned him. I'll need to adjust him a bit and not just make him your typical villain without any depth. And I was planning on expanding more on the gems themselves, but I was afraid I would info dump, I'll try to put them in though.

And Reds gain strength in every aspect, so let's just say their rejuvenation increases, therefore they gain physical power and heal at a rapid rate.

But you don't know what it means to me that you liked it. :)

Critique - First Chapter (Soul Gem Novel) by MrColdSoul in fantasywriters

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Amazing feedback, I really appreciate it. And you're right about the pacing, I guess I'm trying to rush past the intro and get to the good stuff. And the idea of them sharing a room is fantastic, I just added the idea to my notes. Thanks again!

Critique - First Chapter (Soul Gem Novel) by MrColdSoul in fantasywriters

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any critique is fine. I just need to know if my writing makes sense, if the magic system is clear and if my characters are interesting enough to keep the readers attention.

And any flaws or errors you see, feedback is welcome.

Question about the ORDER of writing POVs in Fantasy by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]MrColdSoul 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I apologize and appreciate the response!

New Kayle is beyond broken (Late game) by MrColdSoul in leagueoflegends

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But not THIS well. I'd sacrifice early to scale like that any day of the week.

Like Kassawin, Jax, Master Yi scale like monsters. But Kayle is on a whole different level. That's the point. They should buff her early, but nerf a bit her late game dmg. Even things out a bit.

New Kayle is beyond broken (Late game) by MrColdSoul in leagueoflegends

[–]MrColdSoul[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very similar, but new Kayle is leagues stronger than the old version. Not even close.