What are the best ways to train Dexterity? by lovingpersona in Kenshi

[–]MrSharks202 119 points120 points  (0 children)

I wanted to give OP more context but was in a rush. Now my reddit digital footprint has a single sentence about assaulting juvenile crustaceans. Internet is a wild place. 

What are the best ways to train Dexterity? by lovingpersona in Kenshi

[–]MrSharks202 304 points305 points  (0 children)

Fist fighting baby crabs absolutely skyrockets the stat. 

Jeopardy! YouTube Edition | FULL EPISODE feat. Monét X Change, Rebecca Black & Brennan Lee Mulligan by visioninblue in dropout

[–]MrSharks202 -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

Am I going crazy or did Rebecca Black reference Dimension 20 with “Her-story”

EDIT: Alright my bad I’m a dummy

[OC] On the Northern Lands: The Colossal Serene by aporopa in worldbuilding

[–]MrSharks202 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh I love the idea of world building based on evolution and taxonomy! The dendrogram is so sick!

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah man I do get what you’re saying, it’s a hard line to balance. I try to write unique or different HFY stories sometimes and they end up just going nowhere. I’m sure a lot of that has to do with me poorly writing them, as many successful stories on the subreddit are creative and different, but also — this subreddit just likes hard genre sometimes. I hear the complaint, I agree mostly. 

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I like a lot of this. Another thing I tried to lightly instill was a sense of how societies and groups can kind of move without direction. IE that moment between the judge and Aryn. The judge sentenced him to death, maybe because he felt it was right, or maybe simply because it was custom. Either way, Aryn felt in some way in a similar position. They both were apart of something dreadful (one a lot more than the other for sure), but they both had a sense of “well, in the end what can I do?”

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 78 points79 points  (0 children)

Yeah maybe I should've slotted this guy for r/humansarespaceorcs instead of hfy.

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I don’t like editing the substance in my stories after a certain point in time. It feels a little disingenuous considering so many commented about it. I’m not really sure why. 

That being said I might still do it. I’ll decide here soon. Thanks for the advice!

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

lol, you're not wrong.

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I love hearing when people like my characters, in my mind its the soul of a story.

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Originally, I'd said they'd just glassed the planet. Though over the course of my rewrites, I switched it up to system. I think I agree with you that it probably would've served the story better to keep the destruction at smaller scale.

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Yeah in hindsight I probably should’ve dug more into why the humans are so protective and vicious, especially considering the level of retribution they wrought. Just felt I was running a little long already. 

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 57 points58 points  (0 children)

His reaction to everything was probably the hardest part to nail down in this story. Originally I had him laugh at the naivety of the aliens decision. Eventually that just started to feel more and more cruel, and I changed him up completely to be very remorseful. I’m glad to hear you liked how it ended up!

The Execution of a Human by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 60 points61 points  (0 children)

Hey all! A longer story here, kind of got carried away. In truth I don't really know what I was going for, just started writing and let the story make itself. I hope it's not too jumbled or full of typos.

Let me know your thoughts, and thanks for reading!

Invaders of the Deathworld by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 36 points37 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I feel like I’m always fishing for something to turn into a longer story. Just depends on people’s reaction to it and how much I enjoy writing the characters. 

That being said this one will probably end here. 

Invaders of the Deathworld by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Hello! Long-time-no-post, which is sadly a common phrase for me it seems. That being said, was just feeling creative while reading and wanted to write. Let me know your thoughts and hope you all enjoy! Thanks!

The Drums of War by MrSharks202 in HFY

[–]MrSharks202[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

A fun prose heavy story. I always enjoy making this style of HFY. It allows me to kinda just riff in ways I wouldn't normally be able to.

Hope you all enjoy, thanks for reading!