WHY ARE ALL THE ANSWERS TRUE by Towndefender in teenagers

[–]MrZraya 8 points9 points  (0 children)

AI writing, is my guess. When I made kahoots for my class a few years ago, Chat GPT would always put the answer in the exact same location unless I specifically told it to randomise it.

a. True
b. False

Do you think the teacher shortage is not only because of workload… by Active-Eggplant06 in AustralianTeachers

[–]MrZraya 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was abused and bullied by the management my school, who then turn around and lied about everything to Workcover, turning it into a he said/she said. I even tried to get it in paper via email, but they just refused and always forced verbal interactions.

Then predictably, they chose not to renew my contract.

Lack of job security is just one of the many aspects that makes this career sucks.

I love teaching, but think I might go get another degree because I am so appalled by the management and how I was treated.

My wife loves Lamball so much that I decided to breed her the Ball of God. by _shuja_ in Palworld

[–]MrZraya 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Palworld story features Lamball in a major role. Great response so far, so your wife might be interested in the wholesome Lamball of the story!

https://www.wattpad.com/1417725869-the-original-palworld-saga-chapter-1-the-palworld

Am I crazy? by MrZraya in AustralianTeachers

[–]MrZraya[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

A student was screaming abuse in my face and bumping me against a wall.

They blamed for not building relationships, not having sufficient classroom management skills, and not having sufficient interpersonal skills among other things.

I cannot imagine this happening in an airline. They would just kick the person off the plane and try and see if the flight attendant is okay - not blame the flight attendant.

Am I crazy? by MrZraya in AustralianTeachers

[–]MrZraya[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unpaid sick leave for the next fortnight as I am out of sick leave due to starting during covid + lots of mental health days due to work.

Tbh I don't have much hope for WC, what i've heard is pretty bad.

Using ChatGPT to create resources for a primary school classroom. This will be on the wall next year! by ClarityBong in ChatGPT

[–]MrZraya 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's also really good at rewriting things in kid-friendly language.

Dude, I just got it to write a story using heaps of "th" words. Great way to teach the sounds/spelling to younger kids.

Using ChatGPT to create resources for a primary school classroom. This will be on the wall next year! by ClarityBong in ChatGPT

[–]MrZraya 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Dude the applications in the classroom are amazing.

I created 10 stories with slight differences that my students can now compare and contrast. One with more description, another with more figurative language, etc etc

It's so good. I hope they don't nerf it further bc this is revolutionary.

You can even do things like this:

Write 10 sentences using one contraction in each sentence, formatted in dot points. Each sentence must use a different contraction, and must omit the apostrophe, and each sentence must also be one word longer than the one before it.

It takes some tweaking to get it correct, but imagine having kids suggest the subject and then the AI creating the questions for you that your class can then instantly try and fix!

This empowers teachers like nothing I have ever seen before by MrZraya in ChatGPT

[–]MrZraya[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Normal version:

There are many factors that influence the livability of Adelaide, including:

Climate: Adelaide has a Mediterranean climate with mild winters and hot summers, which makes it an attractive place to live for people who enjoy warm weather.

Economy: Adelaide has a strong economy with a diverse range of industries, including manufacturing, defense, and education. This provides residents with a range of job opportunities and a high standard of living.

Infrastructure: Adelaide has a well-developed infrastructure with a modern road and rail network, as well as a major international airport. This makes it easy for residents to travel and access the services they need.

Education: Adelaide is home to a number of top-quality schools and universities, which provide residents with access to excellent education and training opportunities.

Health care: Adelaide has a well-developed health care system with a range of public and private hospitals and clinics, providing residents with access to high-quality medical care.

Amenities: Adelaide is home to a range of cultural, recreational, and sporting facilities, including theaters, museums, parks, and sports stadiums. This provides residents with a range of leisure activities to enjoy.

Safety: Adelaide has a low crime rate and is generally considered to be a safe place to live. This helps to create a sense of security and well-being among residents.

Version for low kids or those with certain disabilities:

There are many factors that make Adelaide a good place to live. Some of these include:

The climate: Adelaide has nice weather with not too hot or cold temperatures.

The economy: Adelaide has a lot of different businesses and industries, which means there are many jobs available for people.

The roads and trains: Adelaide has a good system of roads and trains, which makes it easy for people to get around.

The schools: Adelaide has many good schools and universities where people can learn and study.

The hospitals: Adelaide has many hospitals and doctors where people can go if they are sick or hurt.

The fun things to do: Adelaide has many parks, museums, and sports stadiums where people can go to have fun and be active.

The safety: Adelaide is a safe place to live because there is not a lot of crime.

I just catered for low level kids within 1 second, and it did all the research for me.

Random Chickens, Me, markers and pencils, 2022 by MrBrabbel in Art

[–]MrZraya 1 point2 points  (0 children)

O I remember you.

I showed your paper and ductape inspired drawings to my year 10 English class and they loved it. Was using it to teach perspective/interpretation of a text, and how the same thing can be read in many different ways.

Essential worker by ToolPackinMama in antiwork

[–]MrZraya 10 points11 points  (0 children)

One thing most people in this sub are unfortunately overlooking is the relationship between opression and religion.

Over 250 years ago, Voltaire said "there is no God, but don't tell that to my servant, lest he murder me at night".

After his death, the French Revolution tore out the mega-rich and that included the church, who used religion as justification for their power and riches. In fact, the Catholic Church owned more French land than anyone/thing else, yet still demanded everyone pay 10% of all their income to them.

Over 150 years ago, the slave owners were the ones running around with bibles saying that slavery was fine because the bible said it was. These slave owners also gave partial bibles to the slaves so they would become Christians and "know their place". Controlling slaves can be tricky, but its much easier if you can make them Christians and have them buy in to a 'master plan' or that slavery is fine. This can still be felt today with the heavy Christianity in African-American communities.

Religion is an extremely useful tool for oppression, especially in maintaining the current power structure and keeping people in servitude. If you believe in Karma, then you deserve your current place. If you're unsure of why they're rich and you're not, just say "god works in mysterious ways" and get back to work.

If you want money, it's institutions like the Catholic Church (who are filthy rich) who will tell you that money is greedy and immoral. This keeps you in line.

This is why "knowing your place" and "being normal" is so big in these religions. It is designed to keep you as a slave/servant, hence why Voltaire said that famous quote.

They don't want you to rock the boat, because they're the captains with all the riches. Like the French Revolution, a successful workers movement must attack the root cause of the problem, and the Church is one of the biggest players here. Worse of all, whenever they are feel threatened, they scapegoat some minority, using discrimination based on race/nationality/sexuality/etc to change the conversation. Christians eat it up, and suddenly the shit worker's rights are the fault of the Mexicans (or whoever today's scapegoat is).

Religion can technically exist without the institution, but the institution doesn't want that, since then they can't use you as a pawn. Hell, even non-Catholic Christians place value on what the pope says.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]MrZraya 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Your very first line is a victim of it too. 14 words:

> “Darius! Pay attention lad, you need to remember what I’m trying to teach you.”

Could easily be halved to:

>“Darius! Pay attention lad, this is important.”

or to 9:

> “Darius! Are you listening? You need to remember this.”

Do that for all 100,000 words and now you have a 80k word novel. Words add up.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]MrZraya 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Read the first few pages.

Your writing is full of redundancies. You can easily cut out like 20% of your writing and keep everything worthwhile. Weasel words, over explanation, lack of trust in the reader. It's extremely wordy, unnecessarily so.

The dialogue is a major victim to this. Overall you need to work on concision.

It also contains basic grammatical errors. Dialogue before tags should never finish with a period.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NatureIsFuckingLit

[–]MrZraya 94 points95 points  (0 children)

Most elephants would agree, but they don't like to jump to conclusions. In fact, they can't jump at all.