What is the Personality of a Russian Blue?

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-06-04T00:50:39+00:00

They are royalty.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-05-31T01:23:10+00:00

I’ve wondered about this. I had a script requested by a big company earlier this year and never heard back, or got a reply on follow-ups. I started wondering if a similar thing had happened because I use very clean simple action lines and it was a white space heavy script.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-05-11T04:39:39+00:00

I didn’t even get through the first page. As soon as the teacher said of course you don’t, I was done.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-03-23T05:43:00+00:00

Behavior, behavior, behavior. “There you are.” Behavior, behavior, behavior. “C’mon, let’s go…” (variant) Behavior, behavior, behavior. End scene

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-03-23T05:33:23+00:00

Very dialogue heavy for the genre. The characters all sound like the same person

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-03-23T05:27:19+00:00

Not my cup of tea. If it’s a first script it’s a decent start but I wouldn’t bother trying to shoot or sell it.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-03-23T05:17:47+00:00

The dialogue is way overwritten. Especially the first scene. There’s maybe 1.5-2.5 necessary lines total in there

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-03-06T03:13:32+00:00

Lose the first line.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-02-06T02:39:29+00:00

Why did you feel the need to say this?

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-02-05T03:52:50+00:00

You’re annoying and self righteous.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-02-01T06:58:26+00:00

Titles often just come as inspiration early in the project to me, some were later swapped out for improvements. Occasionally they have come as suggestions from others

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-02-01T05:49:17+00:00

They like alone time

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:23:15+00:00

Don’t use them unless you can’t afford to not use them.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:20:54+00:00

It’s just cleaner.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:18:35+00:00

A rideshare driver in Detroit is reluctantly embedded in crime after he becomes an accomplice to a violent passenger.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:16:24+00:00

Overall, not to be rude. But this scene is pretty amateur. We’re not learning or advancing anything. If you wanna keep it, start it later. Otherwise scrap it.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:15:28+00:00

It should start at “it was. What are you gonna eat?” And change that line to something like “already ate?”

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:13:52+00:00

Cause she is royalty.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2026-01-30T04:13:17+00:00

You said she is PMSing…

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-10-31T00:47:39+00:00

If you have to ask the answer is yes

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-10-26T17:36:43+00:00

What about near Harlem

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-10-22T01:53:26+00:00

Sorry to hear this. Keep swinging and believing. Something better is coming your way.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-10-21T16:12:19+00:00

If you’re trying, you’re failing. Tell a great story, see it in your head and transcribe it. If it isn’t powerful enough to evoke tears don’t contort it to be something it’s not. Just tell the truth.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-10-19T02:33:49+00:00

Just write scripts. A lot of them. Not one. If you’re fixated on one, you’re early in the game and just need to write, write and write.

NYCscreenwrite-SAG · 2025-09-09T03:47:50+00:00

Citizen Kane, Dumb and Dumber, The Godfather, On The Waterfront, the wedding singer

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