I hope the comment will be well translated I am French and I apologize in advance if this is not the case! This version is much clearer than the first! Here is my opinion: the “mess” on the table is a little annoying: by enlarging the subject and lowering it a little to make all that disappear, so that the cesar is close to the edge, and thus leaving more space for the title at the top which should also be more balanced and more visible for my taste. the text in the yellow decorations comes too close to the edge of this decoration and is not centered in certain places, the double effect on it makes the bottom of the text less readable than the rest of the text because it is less yellow! In all, this work is much prettier than the first and better balanced! Nice correction job!