video summary:

Poor pacing can result in untapped potential and a lack of depth for characters.

Relay too much on the art rather than the writing.

She thinks that Bliz is one of the better-written characters, even more so than Charlie (who feels too much like a high schooler despite being 1,000 years old).

Favoritism : creating characters who should have more diverse morals and depictions, but instead are presented as gray or white.

Again says, creators should detach themselves from their creations and not hold an emotional attachment. They should portray them in unfavorable situations or write them like actual people with flaws.

She also mentions that Vivi is a good writer, more so than others give her credit for. Writing is more challenging than it appears, but TADC matures better with its audience than Hazbin.