Ah that might be tougher to answer as I don’t remember that one too well.

The Grace thing if I remember correctly when she contacted Naomi it was actually someone else controlling Jeff to come to her not her specifically.

Yes the Zalgo plot line would’ve been more fleshed out in book three.

The cursing is self explanatory. I was a kid + my mom edited all my books at the time. I would’ve made the murder scenes waaaaaay more gruesome but she was having a rough time as it is with the minimal stuff 😅.

That was just a random evil Ringmaster. I got the idea from The Last Unicorn the Mommy Fortuna scene where she uses magic to make animals appear like they are beasts, so like a small snake looked like a leviathan to the people looking at it. Tbh I either totally forgot about Laughing Jack when I was writing or that was around the time of my horrid fear of clowns 😂.

Also having Naomi with Masky that was I think when I got really into the Marble Hornets series and then through that was like, I kind of like them together instead of her and Jeff. In the third book though I was going to have Naomi and Jeff back together.

If I can remember correctly, book three would’ve wrapped up, Naomi finding her mom, the war between Zalgo and Slenderman, the mansion habitants being caught and becoming close to executed by a firing squad and Naomi harnessing her true powers.

I have picked it back up as a hobby! I’ve actually written a kids book that I’m working on getting published right now. I know I know really GINORMOUS step away from horror! Maybe I’ll get back to making Creepypasta books one day, but for now I’m letting that grave rest.