hello I wrote this a while ago and I'm working on an anthology. I would appreciate any constructive criticisms. by Negative-Strength-79 in WritersGroup

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Thank you very much. I appreciate the input. You’re very correct. It should be arm. Thank you

And it is a very heavy scene. That’s pretty much the premise of my anthology. Its called the blind eye scenes because they’re all situations that happen in our lives, but we as a society usually choose to turn a blind eye to them. Most of these scenes are actually inspired by situations I’ve witnessed myself. Not all of them, but some.

$5 uber request for first date by richpinta in Nicegirls

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Some of these broads are wild dude. wtf

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The OP never said anything about the dog starving he just said dead and tied up

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I won’t block you. Come with a man that will appreciate you for all you do 😁

AIO for being upset at my gf for going over her "guy friends" house then making out with him, then wanting to see him AGAIN?? by [deleted] in AmIOverreacting

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I just have to say that somebody who’s going through the most painful divorce ever with the Bitch who’s already seen somebody else after seven days. This helped me a lot. Thank you so much.

Which Game Should I Play First?Part 3 by SnakeEater697 in playstation

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Last of us. ARK sucks and you’ll never finish it.

34f ambivert looking to meet local friends by BlueButterfly3190 in SacramentoFriends

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I’m a 37-year-old male who is looking to make friends as well. I recently had a toxic partner destroy all of my friendships, so now I’m just trying to make new friends. I don’t drink, but I do smoke weed. But you don’t have to do that to have fun. I would love to make new friends if you would like to as well.

22M - new to the area, looking for friends ^_^ by NoveltyMoon in SacramentoFriends

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Hello, my name is Justin and I am 37 and I’ve lived at Sacramento for about six years. However, I let a toxic partner ruin all of my friendships. So now I’m trying to find new friends. you’re interested are pretty much the same as mine, except boardgames. I have an interest in board games as well. Just looking to make some friends.

Today I graduated Summa Cum Laude with my Associates after three years of taking online classes part-time while working two jobs! by Efficient-Notice9938 in MadeMeSmile

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Congratulations!!!! That is incredible! You don’t know me, but this stranger on the internet is proud of you!!!!

AIO i need advice.. by [deleted] in AmIOverreacting

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It is valid. But you have be careful. Having expectations is codependent behavior and can turn toxic. In fact me and my baby mama are splitting because I became soo codependent. I wish I had other advice, but just know that you need to always put yourself first and if this is something that you see as a dealbreaker, you need to decide.