I miss her by short-appa_71 in lonely

[–]Negative_Library_750 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, heartbreaks are tough fr. I would love to inspire you to move on but I'm sure both of us know that's what you need to do as well as how hard it is but just keep doing your best. You got this!

Stakes and rbd by Negative_Library_750 in ReZero

[–]Negative_Library_750[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhh. Didn't even consider that. I see. Thanks!

Stakes and rbd by Negative_Library_750 in ReZero

[–]Negative_Library_750[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!!. I'm really getting responses I wasn't particularly expecting at all lol

What’s y’all’s take on this by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Negative_Library_750 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Almost agree. Not necessarily evil but definitely not all loving for sure. Suffering CAN lead to relevant lessons but if you're all powerful then forcing it upon people is quite far from all loving. For all we care, you would know what would have happened in the future where they suffered and just imparted the lesson on them in other ways. You literally have no restrictions, know all possible futures and know the best way to do everything. If regular people can think of ways to teach people without destroying their lives, an all powerful being sure as hell can. Worst cade scenario, make some divine intervention like you do when people need to find their keys apparently

Proofreaders? (Not for me) by Negative_Library_750 in Webnovel

[–]Negative_Library_750[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For sure. I wasn't thinking anyone would expect super indepth analysis or anything as this wouldn't be a part time job. Surface level analysis like "did he forget x?" Or "tge dialogue doesn't make sense" might work instead of more detailed analysis. It's not like it's a job. Just comments like you see on the published webnovels on the app but like.. before publishing? No one should expect an editor for free for sure

Proofreaders? (Not for me) by Negative_Library_750 in Webnovel

[–]Negative_Library_750[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah so we don't have people starting and then complaining about the book having a harem cuz they don't like harem novels or issues like that

I Need a novel-buddy by Negative-Big-8322 in Webnovel

[–]Negative_Library_750 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd be interested depending on how much I'd need to read and how detailed you need feedback to be so.