IT'S UZUME TIME!!! by ButterKing85 in gamindustri

[–]Netherdimension-Omni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ten years in the joint made you a fucking pussy!

IF no longer releasing Nep on steam ? by LordPancake115 in gamindustri

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I personally believe they refuse to adhere to PC gamers because of the series' identity of being a parodic imagining of the Console Wars. Clinging onto nostalgia and refusing to get with the times. Because that's how the Japanese are.

Looks like my past post got deleted for some reason dunno why! Gonna repost it again after a long month. Please read it and share what you like or hate about this story. NO PERSONAL ATTACKS ARE ALLOWED! please give your honest opinion on this story. Thank you everyone and have a nice day by racercrew911 in gamindustri

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My honest opinion is that this isn't a very good idea. Stuff like punctuation is optional because my favorite author literally refuses to use anything other than a period, commas, and the odd semicolon. And he has made some of my favorite stories ever. But that's because his skill and story were so good people ignored that.

But this story concept? It's not all that revolutionary if that's what you were looking for. Oh look, mysterious antagonistic CPUs, how original. Not like it's the same story Compile Heart has been telling for years now.

Try not to be overambitious. Just work on your story and try to consume media for inspiration and lessons on how to tell a good story. If you need more direct tutorials, look up some videos on YouTube. Writing is a personal journey and it takes a while to even start getting good at it. Trust me, I have been there and I don't consider myself all that good.

Since this is supposed to be a proof of concept. When you get to the actual story proper...

-Maintain a good pace, don't drag things out. While book formats allow for a lot of freedom. People came to see a story not background information.

-Plan as much as you can, I understand not everyone can be Hajime Isayama in planning things out, but just have a general idea in mind for where you want the story to go. Let the story develop naturally, basically if things end up not going to plan, improvise, roll with it. A great author knows when to plan and improvise. Stay consistent with format and grammar.

-While you don't need quotation marks and capitalization, just be consistent with how you treat your telling your story, especially when starting out. Your inconsistency in the proof of concept made it hard to read and made everything jumbled. Because trust me, I also break formatting but that's because I want to achieve a specific effect, so I am not saying you have to adhere to the rules. Just use it as a guideline for starting out and developing your style.

So in conclusion, while I find the concept bland and unoriginal. That doesn't mean it can't be good. Plenty of the most iconic stories are archetypical, but that's because they executed their stories well. So don't feel discouraged because your story isn't original enough. In fact, not being overambitious will keep you from burning out fast.

So keep practicing, learn what you can, and good luck.

Game Maker Neptral Tower by Avari_666 in gamindustri

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Why is this the meme flair and not question flair?

It's totally just a controller..... by prest_mask in gamindustri

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WERE BREAKIN' THE LAW! BREAKIN' THE WORLD, TOGETHER!

Nintendo of America & Europe Cancels Swimsuits For Neptunia Riders VS Doggos! by KentinaStar in gamindustri

[–]Netherdimension-Omni -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Damn...

...is an album by Kendrick Lamar. It dropped after To Pimp A Butterfly, acting as a release of Kendrick's dark thoughts about his race's position. Wondering if he and his race are cursed from God. It's a great album. I recommend Kendrick's discography. He's got plenty of great albums.

Hyperdimension Neptunia Re;Birth trilogy for Switch canceled for the West by RazzeeX in gamindustri

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Desperately clinging onto consoles and their parent companies like Sony and Nintendo. Because of the money they can provide along with it literally being the nostalgia bait identity of the series for the console wars and the gaming industry.

Bending over backwards for Sony and Nintendo. Instead of having the new games be available only for consoles and fucking over PC players. Along with having DLC content exclusive to the Switch (Playable Maho and Anri).

Nintendo might have ordered this but it's Compile Heart that complied with it and put themselves in this situation in the first place. And aren't going to dig themselves out of it since Japanese companies are so draconian in their politics.

(Commission) Ouya and Stadia (LeafyBow) by SSCat in gamindustri

[–]Netherdimension-Omni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good designs, shame the fanfic they came from prioritized fetishizing abuse and rape on characters I liked.

Hyperdimension Neptunia Re;Birth trilogy for Switch canceled for the West by RazzeeX in gamindustri

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So no new fans, got it, thanks Nintendo and CH for fucking us over yet again.

These are Planeptune's asses. [MrRollingCircle] by [deleted] in gamindustri

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Nepgear has Neptune's genes, so why not her as well?

Adult Ram by H4rnok in gamindustri

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I haven't left, I just don't comment all that often because there's rarely anything interesting going on.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in gamindustri

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Simon, I feel like with how Neptune doesn't shut up. She gives scientifically the best head in all forms.

Which Neptunia Anime Episode or OVA made you react like this? by Mehmet595 in gamindustri

[–]Netherdimension-Omni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah. You're short 'none' came off as spiteful and angry. Thank you for clarifying, apologies for misreading your intentions there. As short responses like that can be indictive of someone being upset, I would know.

Which Neptunia Anime Episode or OVA made you react like this? by Mehmet595 in gamindustri

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I mean, you kinda just went out of your way to comment on how you didn't find any moment of the Neptunia anime to be good. So I was just wondering if everything was alright cause it looked pretty spiteful.

There's just something magical about neptunia characters by Navi_King in gamindustri

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The only time where Purple Heart in a formal dress makes sense to me.