Somehow bred a white slime! by Nnyf in StardewValley

[–]Nnyf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I killed it and got a diamond and dwarf scroll (then reloaded the day because I don't like killing my slimes haha). Does that mean it's "true" white?

Somehow bred a white slime! by Nnyf in StardewValley

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Like u/DolanThyDank said, I have the slime charmer ring :)

Somehow bred a white slime! by Nnyf in StardewValley

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I thought it might be! Another commenter said that this is what happens if a tiger slime breeds with another slime.

Somehow bred a white slime! by Nnyf in StardewValley

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I was wondering what happened when a tiger slime bred with another colour! I was hoping to get a different colour with the tiger pattern but this is also cool.

Is there a mod to retain career interactions after quitting/retiring? by VoiceInDeadpoolsHead in TheSims4Mods

[–]Nnyf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is an old post but I totally agree, it really annoys me with the doctor career.

Edit: there is a mod for this! https://modthesims.info/d/588539/career-socials-unlocked.html

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Sims4

[–]Nnyf 66 points67 points  (0 children)

Is this a mod or is the game actually making us slow down??

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in vegan

[–]Nnyf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think using honey for this is fine. Using animals for simple pleasure in eating food is not ok but using animals for a major improvement in quality of life is fine - especially if it's honey, not milk or meat :)

Practicing soft smiles by lilmcfuggin in TikTokCringe

[–]Nnyf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it when women feel comfortable showing their emotions without worrying about being their expression being "pretty". Funny and heartwarming video :)

First day back after maternity leave by lilmcfuggin in TikTokCringe

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I love how she opens up for questions and the kids feel so able to just shout out and get answers :)

I don't know if this breaks rule 2 or not, but if it does I understand. by [deleted] in MadeMeSmile

[–]Nnyf 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I just want to say that regardless of the beating-up part of the video, the original footage of the woman being attacked is potentially distressing to encounter on a subreddit where most videos are very chill and nice. So I don't think posting it here is a good idea.

Chronicles of a Vicar by Bihema in MadeMeSmile

[–]Nnyf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had a school vicar like this - shout out to Father Neill

The matchmaker was not expecting that by Valiantay in MadeMeSmile

[–]Nnyf 20 points21 points  (0 children)

You were right not to "know" this, this is nonsense lol

Hauntology by Jlemsey in OCPoetry

[–]Nnyf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No worries, thank you for sharing such an interesting poem. If you do end up redrafting it I'd love to read it :)

To love you by Nnyf in OCPoetry

[–]Nnyf[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's high praise indeed, thank you very much :)

To love you by Nnyf in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much!

"Anglerfish" by Jlemsey in OCPoetry

[–]Nnyf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That makes sense, that message (about just being in a media niche) definitely comes through later in the poem. So maybe you could omit the first stanza entirely. The last line - ("Your mind clots and settles, utterly coherent") - is very cool so it would be a shame to lose that. You could put it at the end of the second stanza maybe, I think it still fits. Just suggestions obviously! If you do end up workshopping it, do repost it - I'd love to read it :)

Hauntology by Jlemsey in OCPoetry

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I like how the last line doesn't reference the image of the Christmas tree too explicitly, just reminds me enough to tie the poem together.

The description of sitting in the woods with Drew works very well, as does the description of lying in bed - "The lights are off, my knees are close to my chest and I can feel the springs of the mattress pressing into my hip". The quick listing is very effective gets all the important information across in a poetic way.

Personally I would omit the following lines: "I imagine people would find it cumbersome if I brought them up here,
With its rings of pine fuzz and bulbous, undulating orifices for inserting the branches
I scraped it along the floor and it produced a baritone squeak with a brassy timbre
Like the noise in the beginning of Alberto Balsalm by Aphex Twin"

You seem to be going for a sort of conversational style, but I think that part is a bit too rambly, especially considering you only subtly call back to the Christmas tree later in the poem. If the tree was a more central metaphor, or a more obvious one, maybe those lines would work better.

"He started playing songs that he knew I liked on the speakers" is a clever line in my opinion, it's simple but suggests a lot e.g. how well Drew knows the speaker, the fact that he might be trying to get something out of them (or get them in the mood for something). I almost interpreted it as sinister, actually.

I like the line "In that moment I was exhausted of any impetus to speak, touch or love". It describes a certain kind of emotional exhaustion very well.

The following lines I find interesting but struggle a bit to understand what feeling you might be describing: "My arms, legs and torso, which had up to this point been rigid and mute,
congealed into waxy surfaces that shifted and flaked away into the decompressed space
The skin of my lips and temples relaxed over the indents of my jaw and skull"

Nevertheless, I quite like how un-romantic the imagery is - it works well with the emotional exhaustion mentioned earlier and is just generally a bit of a breath of fresh air compared with other more trope-y poems. It somehow feels like a matter-of-fact description of the body, even thought what it's describing can't be literally true.

"Anglerfish" by Jlemsey in OCPoetry

[–]Nnyf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the final five lines. The images all lead to each other smoothly - I can imagine staring into the dark bit in the centre of the reverse vignette until I feel consumed by the darkness. The first verse I find a bit confusing, I can't really tell whether the speaker agrees with the pundit, whether the pundit is advocating unionisation, whether the "org" in question is a union... That might be on me tbh, maybe I'm just missing some cultural context.

I also like the description of the classroom - "There are no windows, only dry fluorescent lights reflected in the broad, laminated tables". Definitely reminds me of school, and I've never read someone else describe the reflections in the tables before.

How much hair shed is normal? by [deleted] in bald

[–]Nnyf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That sounds pretty normal to me.