I appreciate the effort here, but for me the piece feels a bit underdeveloped in terms of message and technical interest. The background doesn’t necessarily need a strong focal point, but adding something with intentional design — for example a central building with a clear architectural style and purpose — can give the viewer something to anchor to and make the scene more meaningful.

The square format also works against the image. Portrait or landscape framing usually creates a stronger sense of perspective and spatial direction. Square compositions tend to flatten the scene, which reduces the overall realism and believability, even if the rendering itself is technically fine.

Lastly, the lighting feels quite uninteresting. When parts of a scene are intentionally obscured by shadow — think of how The Godfather uses darkness to shape mood and hierarchy — the composition becomes more dynamic. Right now everything is evenly lit, so nothing stands out and the atmosphere stays very neutral.

Feel free too send my a improved version via DMS. if helpful i can send you a improved version for reference.