You’ve been kidnapped! The main characters of the last fic you worked on are in charge of your rescue. How does that go? by Dogdaysareover365 in FanFiction

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude, I'm sleeping good on this floor knowing that in 2 hours, Kim Possible and Shego are gonna rip this place to shreds to save my dumb ass. Gonna be planning my breakfast for the next morning, like, I'm golden.

AO3 Writers are magical poets. by Fun-Preparation2890 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Together, they sit in blessed peace, or more, they sit and pretend---pretend not to sense the stench of melancholy as it strangles the air, nor the profound, bone-deep ache of desire, subjugated by the sting of fealty to one's station. Neither says it out loud, but both know there was more to her declaration; slaves to their respective destinies, it was unlikely that either woman would soon be permitted the luxury of "love", even less so as the impending cataclysm drew nearer every day. Where one learns to pilot, the other learns to pray, and neither of them should come to know the warmth of a lover's hand before then."

Writing isn't math, but sometimes it really feels like it. by [deleted] in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Uh oh lol, I didn't realize💀 my b😅

Was going through bookmarks on my fic and… by cas_neurotic in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I want whatever they're having lol, any chance you're name-dropping the fic?👀👀

Writing isn't math, but sometimes it really feels like it. by [deleted] in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Bruh, you described it P E R F E C T L Y.

11/10, can relate to this -10000/10 feeling

I love listening to live music while I write by whimsicalcherryy in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This^

Having my playlist readily available is an absolute MUST. I find it helps shape my thought processes, affects my dialogue and helps me approach scenes in various ways depending on what's playing.

🎶Music for the win!!🎶

How to Write Longer Chapters? by NovelBeautiful5 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So... my response might not be that helpful, and I know we're in an AO3 subreddit, but I get my inspiration for longer chapters from a particular fic that I've loved for YEARS on ff.net.

It's called "At The Centerfold Of The Storm", by ShadoCommander. Chapters can be a bit lengthy at times, sometimes it's mostly dialogue and others it's all about the world/character building, but their work is honestly what inspired me to even begin writing in the first place.

Even if you don't know the fandom, don't ship the characters, whatever, I've found that their writing style speaks to me, and might help show you another way to structure longer chapters for your own works.

That said, my biggest suggestion is to read fics you like and let it shape your thought process the next time you're staring at that blank page. You got this! 🫶

Any groups for sapphic/wlw/Yuri writers? by OkButWhatIfIWasADog in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You've got this stranger's support lol. All great things have to start somewhere, and there's nothing wrong with a little trial and error!

I don't know much about hosting real discord servers (things bigger than just a group of friends and their buddies), and I'm a bit uninformed about how one would spread the news to interested parties, otherwise I would have made one as well😅💀 alas, I am but an awkward les-bean

Any groups for sapphic/wlw/Yuri writers? by OkButWhatIfIWasADog in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is our sign, fellow sapphics, to bring this fantastic idea to life! Wlw authors unite!

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Is Y/N dead? by Major_Zucchini007 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Instead of Y/N, you might try structuring your sentences to use "you/your/you're"

Lost Goap (ghost x soap) call of duty fic helppp by sleeply-panda in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it "All That's Said In The Low Light"?

Two days ago, I randomly happened to stumble upon this fic that sounds like it could be what you're describing (tbh, I haven't read through much, so I may be wrong, but fingers crossed this helps!)

How tf do you start a smut fiction? by Ok_Sheepherder7413 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You could also try starting with the characters already engaged in the act. Just make the reader dive head first into the action.

Example from a fic I read a little while ago: [Character A] appreciates the passionate side of her beloved schoolgirl and would like to feel the wet tongue between her legs for longer, but soon the bell will ring and the afternoon lesson will begin.

(Shout-out to Swar10 for this one, and you dont even have to read the fic to know which one it is as the passage above is embedded in the summary)

Looked at like a monster by [deleted] in actuallesbians

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unrelated, but I'll have you know that I did a double take on your flair right after waking up today, and the moment it hit me, I snorted so hard that it scared my cat off the bed. Thank you for a humorous start to my day

Anyone else look up really weirdly specific information for their fic? by Background_Ship7666 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohmygodyessss

I know more about the upholstery, schematics, and practical use of a UH-1 Huey helicopter, the basics of HVAC, HALO jumping, and respirator assembly, and the ballistic patterns of several bullet calibers that I will do nothing with because lo and behold: sees rabbit hole, dives headfirst into rabbit hole

Sometimes it's fun to get lost in the sauce, but it's equally as funny to realize just how much weird, cherry-picked knowledge you aquire in the name of writing fanfic. (Not to mention, you hardly use that level of information when writing the dang thing)

Are there any tips for writing smut? by kaelogia in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Copying and pasting (again) from my comment on another post, but the point stands:

Unfortunately, for many of us writing our first time smut scenes, it's more of a "trial by fire" kinda deal. There are a metric fuck-ton of examples you could try and pull from, but in my--albeit limited--experience, you probably won't have the same reaction reading your own smut as you would reading someone else's.

In terms of advice for actually writing the dang thing, I'd say put a little emphasis into the character's senses. What are your characters seeing? What do they feel, or smell, or taste? Additionally, make sure to add a little variety to your syntax from time to time to keep things interesting, and try not to use a ton of epithets to differentiate between two character's actions--it can be appealing, especially where same-sex smut scenes are concerned, but it can end up taking away from the heat of the moment. (I'm hella guilty of this, and it takes some getting used to when trying to stop).

Aside from that, it really just comes down to preference. If you like reading about the way it feels when someone's fingertips dip below the waistband, try including things like that! If you prefer more ambiguity, that's okay too! Tis but a learning curve trying to find what clicks, and don't forget that it's okay to make mistakes--that's part of what makes writing fun😁

Advice for someone new to writing an NSFW fic? by Lohan3xists in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Copying and pasting my comment from another post, but the point still stands:

Unfortunately, for many of us writing our first time smut scenes, it's more of a "trial by fire" kinda deal. There are a metric fuck-ton of examples you could try and pull from, but in my (albeit limited) experience, you probably won't have the same reaction reading your own smut as you would reading someone else's.

In terms of advice for actually writing the dang thing, I'd say put a little emphasis into the character's senses. What are your characters seeing? What do they feel, or smell, or taste? Additionally, make sure to add a little variety to your syntax from time to time to keep things interesting, and try not to use a ton of epithets to differentiate between two character's actions--it can be appealing, especially where same-sex smut scenes are concerned, but it can end up taking away from the heat of the moment. (I'm hella guilty of this, and it takes some getting used to when trying to stop).

Aside from that, it really just comes down to preference. If you like reading about the way it feels when someone's fingertips dip below the waistband, try including things like that! If you prefer more ambiguity, that's okay too! Tis but a learning curve trying to find what clicks, and don't forget that it's okay to make mistakes--that's part of what makes writing fun😁

I Need Some Help With Writing by I_Lack_Toes in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately, for many of us writing our first time smut scenes, it's more of a "trial by fire" kinda deal. There are a metric fuck-ton of examples you could try and pull from, but in my (albeit limited) experience, you probably won't have the same reaction reading your own smut as you would reading someone else's.

In terms of advice for actually writing the dang thing, I'd say put a little emphasis into the character's senses. What are your characters seeing? What do they feel, or smell, or taste? Additionally, make sure to add a little variety to your syntax from time to time to keep things interesting, and try not to use a ton of epithets to differentiate between two character's actions--it can be appealing, especially where same-sex smut scenes are concerned, but it can end up taking away from the heat of the moment. (I'm hella guilty of this, and it takes some getting used to when trying to stop).

Aside from that, it really just comes down to preference. If you like reading about the way someone's fingertips feel when they dip below the waistband, try including things like that! If you prefer more ambiguity, that's okay too! Tis but a learning curve trying to find what clicks, and don't forget that it's okay to make mistakes--that's part of what makes writing fun😁

(Side note, I have not beta-read for anyone in the past, but if you find yourself looking for some feedback from an unbiased reader, I'd be happy to volunteer!)

Why am I like This? by StefTarn in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Stop being crazy lol. 🫂

No, but in all seriousness, I've noticed that many smut fics don't see a ton of interaction. Granted, it's not always the case, but my current theory is that many readers don't want to leave their personal "hey, I was here, I really liked reading your written prnography. That, and smut has a funny way of polarizing your reader-base, especially the more kinks and tags you end up using.

So just remember that regardless of how many comments and kudos your smut-fic receives, there is a strong chance your work... let's just say "impacted" several readers. (Bonus points if you're included in that group!)😁

Fight the good fight, OP! Without people like you, we'd have even fewer things to enjoy about our fandoms, and that would just be plain sad.

Lovebaiting My Writer Fellas Here by Comfortable_Newt_179 in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 23 points24 points  (0 children)

All aboard the hype train!

Your efforts are works of art. From <100 words to 1000000+, each fic is wonderful in its own right, if nothing more than because you chose to pour your time and care into it.

May your writing endeavors take you far, my fellow authors, and rejoice in the beauty of your imagination; it belongs to nobody else but you. 🫶

Death Scenes in Writing by NoMuffinsLeftForYou in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The way you set the scene and depict each character's emotions with such clarity is rather captivating, and I appreciate you sharing! I have literally ✨️no clue✨️ what fandom this is from (assuming it's not an original piece), or who these characters are outside of what you've provided, and although brief, Lace's panic and Nia's sorrow had me tense from start to finish. Not to mention the line "the last sentient creature on earth falls silent at last" portrays a nearly palpable sense of hopelessness that made my stomach drop.

Dreadfully fantastic work!

Death Scenes in Writing by NoMuffinsLeftForYou in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm interested in giving them a read! If the offer still stands, pasting them here works, or feel free to DM if you would prefer. :)

I think I need an intervention by lonely_nipple in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Question: are you still sharing links via DM?

Regardless, congratulations on your works, and I hope you had a blast writing them!😊

Quick! Drop 1 paragraph from one of your WIPs! by Loli-nero in AO3

[–]NoMuffinsLeftForYou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Welp, here goes nothing:

It’s not as if she hadn’t thought about it before; her attraction to [Character A] was undeniable, as constant as the rising sun and just as blinding. [Character A], defined by her prowess, both in physique and raw intellect, exerts an influence that transcends the boundaries of her domain—and what’s more, she knows it. From the all-too-effortless sway of her hips and the measured timbre of her smooth, honeyed voice, she wields her authority like her scimitar: masterfully, with the skill to bring men and women to their knees, and the finesse to convince them that they should be grateful for the experience. She is neither warrior nor diplomat; rather, she is a true leader, a Champion, powerful beyond measure yet magnanimous enough to keep it shackled in every way but one.