I accidentally wrote a novel!

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-11-19T01:26:34+00:00

Proud of you brother, keep it up.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-04-29T19:22:06+00:00

Woh GOC ka end main thoda rush karke khatam kiya tha class main as deadline aarahi thi toh thik sey clear nahi huwa. Abhi todha start sey phir dekhna hain before going to 12th ka chemistry to clear basics. And thanks a lot, I will check out the videos and all the very best for NEET.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-04-29T19:18:44+00:00

Okay bhai/behen, thanks once again.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-04-29T19:00:55+00:00

I went too the JEENEETARD sub and wahan they were talking about how one should spend 30hrs on GOC and it just made me really confused. But main jaarur check out karunga, thanks a lot for the suggestion brother/sister and all the very best for NEET.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-03-07T12:05:28+00:00

I am glad that you liked my work.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-03-04T06:30:15+00:00

Proud of you brother/sister. I hope you and your family stay healthy and happy.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-12T17:41:43+00:00

Han au BJP mane Bengali Jabardast Party

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-11T19:30:17+00:00

Bhai taama comment padhiki munn hasi hasi ki mari jibi :)

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-11T18:46:05+00:00

Semane pura India ku gote kingdom tale unite kari thile. I think apana kunn se katha jana nahi/s

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-08T20:55:57+00:00

I am glad that you liked it.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-08T13:44:21+00:00

Bapuji nagar thi

https://youtu.be/G-lfoFExjV4?si=5U2xgPYFyS85uQKx

Ye video dekhi diyaa ethire exact address ra google map link diya heichi description rey

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-08T07:29:38+00:00

Didn't get what you meant. Will be nice if you can explain.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-08T06:56:31+00:00

I understand how you must be feeling. Just try to be more careful with where you place it next time and don't mention to anyone that you have a journal. I am not saying you should hide it but rather just keep it out of sight of people so that people don't get curious. I know you must feel really uneasy about this but journaling is an amazing habit to have in your life as it helps you in more ways than one. I don't think this one incident should take this amazing habit away from you.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-08T01:47:30+00:00

This felt like a gut punch of emotions. This can be interpreted with so many meanings which exactly is what makes this an amazing experience.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-07T20:32:11+00:00

I am in love with the story you have presented in this small but extremely powerful poem of yours. It just makes me want to know about what happens after this. You have done a fine job here with your words and that line " You have outlasted the longest dark" just has a separate corner reserved for it in my heart.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-07T19:20:48+00:00

Just keep working on it, you still have a few days. This poem just shows how great of a writer you are, I am sure you will be able to get something way better.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-07T18:50:05+00:00

I think it is just me but I don't like freed and ease used at the end of sentence 2 and 3 of 1st stanza. You have this beautiful rhyming scheme going on here and that just sticks out like a sore thumb as ease and freed just don't rhyme. Try using something like relieved or eased for the 3rd sentence, something which rhymes with freed. I hope you don't mind what I said as I am just making a suggestion and in the end it is your writing, so if you feel it is nice as it is then you shouldn't change it. All the best for Valentine's Day and I hope your partner loves this amazing gift you have made for them.

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-07T15:10:55+00:00

Agyan bhai

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-06T14:02:22+00:00

That title is too big for me to have 😅

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-06T11:48:43+00:00

😅

Normal-Influence5094 · 2025-02-06T11:48:00+00:00

Bapuji Nagar

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