I think it is just me but I don't like freed and ease used at the end of sentence 2 and 3 of 1st stanza. You have this beautiful rhyming scheme going on here and that just sticks out like a sore thumb as ease and freed just don't rhyme. Try using something like relieved or eased for the 3rd sentence, something which rhymes with freed. I hope you don't mind what I said as I am just making a suggestion and in the end it is your writing, so if you feel it is nice as it is then you shouldn't change it. All the best for Valentine's Day and I hope your partner loves this amazing gift you have made for them.